EDIT to The Nautilus Protocol. · 9:13pm Oct 2nd, 2014
So, in preparation to writing a new chapter for The Nautilus Protocol, I went through my previous chapters and tried to remove all of my previous errors.
Let me tell you, those first few chapters really showed my previous inexperience.
Anyway, most of the errors that I changed were quite small, but a few need to be noted here:
I removed the "decoding" when translating Twilight's language, and sort of implied that her language was already part of the database. (Spoiler, its slightly modified Chimiric. Plot Point.)
I changed a few things with how certain people interacted with others. Nothing too earth shaking, but if you go back and read again, you may see some things that are different.
I re-wrote a lot of Pinkie's interaction with Captain Hale. It wasn't really well put together the first time, but I think I did much better this time around.
I changed a few things during Zelgius's presentation to the Equestrian Leadership, hopefully clarifying some things in preparation for the coming chapter.
A LOT of miscellaneous error fixes, mainly those that you guys have pointed out, as well as (hopefully) everywhere I made a your/you're, its/it's and then/than mistake, as well as the comma at the end of a conversation error that I found out about while I was writing What I've Become.
Anyway, as many of you can already guess, I'm close to finishing the next chapter for The Nautilus Protocol. Also, as the chapters progress, keep your eyes open for a bit of a surprise. I believe some of you will like where this is going to go.
Sweet. Been looking forward to a new chapter of this story.