Sep
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FimFiction Sins: Princess Celestia Hates Tea · 6:13pm Sep 5th, 2014
Got the idea while I was editing a new story for Chengar Qordath. Let me know if you guys want more of these. Also, I'll be working on story updates next week, so stay tuned!
Also, before any of you get bright ideas, these are satirical and humorous. Don't take these too seriously, as with the real Cinema Sins, which, if you haven't seen, go do that now. I mean, even before you read this. Not just because that would help you get this, but because they're amazing.
BTW, Initially people couldn't see my notes, but I changed it to "anyone with the link can comment" so that you can. Pease do not comment.
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A little known fact: The initial cause of the dispute between Princess Celestia and Princess Luna was over who was responsible for cleaning the Celestial Coffee Pot.
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I don't get it.
Maybe something is going wrong when I load it, but all I see is the original story.
2429994 Oh... you don't see the notes? Hmm... You're right. I'll try to fix that.
2429994 Try that.
What is this! You steppin on my territory bro!?
lol no seriously, nice job. If you want there's an actual group dedicated to this that you can join.
Ooh, Cinema Sins-ish review? Nicely done.
Also, there is totally a group on FiMFiction for Sins reviews, now. Just gonna throw it out the--
*shot for promoting stuff*
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2430193 Huh... I had no idea. I'll think about it.
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how have I been doing this so long without knowing there was another group? Interesting
Okay, now we have to see your sin count on my fic once it's published.
Also, if we're doing it Cinemasins style, shouldn't every sin count start with one for reading?
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Huh. I had no idea there was one another one around here, either. Granted, it was an acquaintance of mine that actually made our group and not me, but still. Neato.
(Bonus points for actually including a Sins video on the front page, tho.)
2430230 I can verify that you are correct. Literally, no story is without at least one sin
I think this would work better with a story that had actual sins in it, instead of a well-written story that you are trying and usually failing to find problems with.
2431901 again, this is a joke. I adore this story.
Shoot, apparently you didn't protect document such that a random user such as myself (as Phillip M.) can't click the resolve button to remove a suggestion. And unfortunately I unloaded the page to come back here, so any potential to simply undo it with the undo/redo buttons is gone.