A What-If to Celestia's Royal Break Up Chronicle?

I wrote one for Luna, so why not Celly?

Tis a bit strange really, but I woke up today with the urge and it hasn't left me yet. For if Luna's original was dark, and her What-If was good.

Then why not make Celly's good ending turn...dark.

Summary in bullet points...sort of!

* Tobias breaks up with her like in the original, the difference this time is instead of leaving him be, Celestia refuses to let him leave and traps him in her chambers until he 'loves her again'.

* Chrysalis is persuaded to be him whilst Celly does this.

* Celestia reveals a side of herself briefly hinted in the original story. A mare so deeply in love with her beloved that she absolutely refuses to be alone again.

* She will not use the same mind rape that Luna did in her chronicle. Celestia want's him to love and forgive her naturally...and if she has to keep him for a thousand years before he does so, then so be it!

Suggestions are accepted. Celestia, for me at least, hasn't shown this side of herself seriously since I wrote Come Back To Me, so I'm looking forward to writing it.

If you could find the appropriate picture, it would be most appreciated :D

Now don't mind me, I'm off to a Mcdonalds interview!

Cya, stay snuggly!

Comments

[Hatty_Hattington]

Why no mind rape?

[The Prime Evil]

Mcdonalds???? Good luck with your sanity.

[ZheubermAnce]

i want a doomsday timer for Tobias in the form of forced marriage
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[Twist of fate]

Sounds awesome, also is this to your liking fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/044/a/c/celestia_emote__not_pleased_by_tunskaa-d4pocdl.png

[Zamairiac]

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Needs more crazy

[Shadow Bolt]

So the immortal thing in Luna's chronicle is also in this one. I don't understand what Chrysalis role is. I'm wondering how this will end, whether they get back together or not.

Also what happened to the Cadance chronicle you were going to do?

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[Twist of fate]

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if it's crazy celestia you want crazy celestia you'll get
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Is this crazy enough for you?

[Jollygoodfellow]

The idea that she ties him up seems a bit boring and predictable

[Zamairiac]

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She doesn't tie him up, he's free to roam around. In fact I've chosen a different approach to this.

Basically Celestia will pretty much do what she did in the original when they broke up. It's what happens after that's dark.

Stalking, using subtle words to stop him from leaving, making it so he can roam around all of Canterlot if he wishes.

But if he tries to leave...

To put it simply, this time she doesn't leave him be.

...shame he hasn't purchased an anti magic lock on his house.

Celly watching him sleep sounds so fun

[Ghost-091]

Well, I hope you don't have to fight the same competition that I had to when I got interviewed for an entry level position. The guy in front of me had a Master's degree, the guy behind me had a Doctorate, and they were both going after the same job I was (that's how bad the US economy is)...

[Grevin5]

I'd read it.

[fluttershyfan3030]

I would deffiniately read it I would like to see Celestia's "Nightmare moon" side

[Robokirby]

I would read that. Plus there is no enough Celestia x human stories so there is that too.

Also Crazy Celestia

[HiddenHappiness]

Yeahh please do one for cellyy

[Daps]

Heh, i guess it would be nice.

[Sketchy Changeling]

Sounds quite interesting... I still have to fight my laziness and finish the last chapter of "Alex or Xander," though...

[Peacekeeper]

im happy for no mind rape :D
poor chrysalis though

[RadicalThestral]

So basically, Celestia goes "super clingy stalker marefriend", and essentially coops him up in Canterlot.

It's a case of weird-obsessive-marefriend-time-for-Celestia resulting in not-so-fun-times-for-Tobias. Sounds good to me.