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Feo Takahari


Mainly an editor. Currently working for Rakni.

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  • 443 weeks
    Ponies for tolerance?

    Tonight, the world rallies together. Tomorrow, we'll start pulling each other apart in search of someone to blame.

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  • 446 weeks
    Canon marches on

    When I started writing Chitin, I wanted to write about ideas and concepts raised by the first two seasons, and I had zero interest in writing about season 4. I felt like I needed to acknowledge more recent developments, so I made it an AU splitting off at season 3.

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  • 453 weeks
    I'm thinking of jumping ship

    I was always a little awkward in this fandom. At the point when I arrived, Game of Thrones was a spreading dark spot on the cultural landscape, and cute cartoon ponies felt like my only option if I didn't want fiction where life sucked and everyone died. Idealism was such a powerful tonic for me that I was willing to ignore everything else that bothered me, both in canon and in fandom.

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  • 456 weeks
    How do you find a mod, anyway?

    I'm thinking of leaving the Short Stories group, but no one else is moderating it at this point. My attempts to find a mod turned up nothing. I hate to see it get abandoned again, but I'm not sure what to do.

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  • 464 weeks
    Don't expect to see much of me in the near future

    I figured I'd stay with my parents while I took a summer class to qualify for my CPA license. Long story short, my computer is now on the dining room table so they can see what I'm doing. I cannot write like this.

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May
26th
2014

Looking for in-character CMC fic to study · 1:29am May 26th, 2014

I'm having a much harder time writing the CMCs than the Mane Six in Chitin, and I think I've figured out why. I'm not just relying on how the Mane Six are written in canon, I'm combining various fanonical interpretations of them, applying different ideas on how they would act in abnormal situations. The CMCs . . . well, not a lot of fic does much to establish that the CMCs aren't just different heads of the same hydra. (The only fic I can think of offhand that really goes into the differences between them is Three Wishes by Xepher, and I'm not entirely sold on how it portrayed Sweetie Belle in particular.) What fics do you recommend to study their differing personalities and behaviors?

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Hmm, none really come to mind at the moment. I mean, sure I've written a fic which has them in an abnormal situation, but I'm not confident in my ability to write them in-character enough to recommend it to you.

Try some of the groups dedicated to them as individuals or as the CMC. I'm sure you'll find something useful in one of them.


~The lizardman is sorry he couldn't be of greater help

Let's see... Maybe this one? Possibly this one? Also possibly This one.

Then there's Flash Fog, which does a fine job of all characters, including the CMC, but doesn't focus on them. Also, it's rather long.

That's at least all I can think of from the top of my head. I don't know if these'll work for you, but I'm hoping!

Best.
Rakni

I recommend focusing on stories that look at individual Crusaders. When the three get together, they tend to play off of one another and form a stupidity greater than the sum of its parts. Each on her own, however, has to carry the story on her own merits, which means that the author has to figure out what those are.

My apologies for not offering specific titles, but I think this will make the search easier.

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