Rewrite was posted! · 7:27pm May 15th, 2014
I just thought of post this for any of you now following me, who were wanting to read the new beginning I have for the story!
So..............
Yeah.
Plain and simple Brony. (Loves Ding Dongs. (The chocolate kind(Not the weiner kind (Unless I'm in a good mood.))))
I just thought of post this for any of you now following me, who were wanting to read the new beginning I have for the story!
So..............
Yeah.
so is the original now dead and gone? or are you doing both?
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Both.
2114895 okie dokie lokie!
I've been reading the two chapters that are posted so far and I have to say the improvements are very noticeable.
The characters seem more vivid and alive and their personalities seem very well done so far.
I also enjoy the subtle differences to Alex, making him a bit more of a normal everyday guy.
Really loving it so far and please keep up the good work. I'm going through some things at the moment and whenever I see a chapter from your stories or any of my favourites it just makes me feel better knowing I have something to help take my mind off things and entertain me.
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Well, I hope you're happy with everything I add to the new story, and how i continue the original one. Although they may end differently.
Although I like the new one, I enjoy the old one better.
I think the new one is better written then the old one. But I still enjoy the old one more.
Weird.