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May
15th
2014

Technical Notes · 4:59pm May 15th, 2014

A quick update:

* I'm going to be slowly making some minor changes to Just Us Little Ponies, as recommended by the Lunaverse Quorum, over the next couple weeks. I've already started on a few things (mostly just making it so Snails isn't 'cheating' in the ice cream thing at the end). It's nothing major in terms of plot, mostly minor details (e.g., 'how many trains can Volk control at once in the train station battle', 'why was Snails sad in chapter 1', 'how does Carrot Top feel about her position in the Elements'), but just a heads-up.

* Similarly, I already made the change in Old Friends that people wanted, clarifying that Greengrass did not lose his seat or his title, just his influence. (And while he still lost Notary right before that story, one of the changes I'm making to JULP is that he gets her back in the end of that story, thereby finishing up his arc).

So, basically, if you're looking at those stories and things seem slightly different, it's not you, it's me making a few edits.

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So, mostly minor stuff other than something at the end with Notary?

Alright then! Keep us posted on when you're done, I'll happily go check the result! :pinkiesmile:

2114333 : In Old Friends, the Greengrass thing is the only thing. In JULP it's slightly more extensive, but nothing that will change the overall plot. Again, it's most little details.

Good. He works better IN the Court AS a cautionary example about overreach.

2114333 : Basically, yeah.


2114335 : Updates made! (Sorry, forgot to ping this earlier).

2197510 I'm reading through them right now. so far I only have good things to say and a few technical nitpicks.

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