What makes this so good!? · 12:43am May 3rd, 2014
I just noticed my fic What choice do I have has reached 700 likes. I can't thank you guys enough for that.
I've heard some people tell me that after reading it, they think it is one of the better twilight falls into darkness stories. Some say due to the strong tone in the fic, or because the alternate take of what possesses her. That I know is one of the main reasons I did this story, because in honesty I was a little annoyed how most of the stories involved twilight turning into an evil alicorn, or simply a dark shadow form taking her over.
While I do like hearing compliments though, I know my fic does have its flaws through it, some complaints on ooc moments or too dark of scenes in the last few chapters.
I still hold it strong in my opinion inner demons as one of the best twilight possessed fics.
So question, What makes you all like this story so much? What do you think/ wish will happen? Let me know.
I haven't read the story that much, I deeply regret so but too much time right now, but I do hope that Twilight goes back to normal in the end.
i like it for pretty much the reasons stated above and your little spikexrainbow ship on the side
Personally, I haven't read it yet, sorry to say
But clearly, you're doing well for your readers if they favor this story out of most 'Twilight falls into darkness' fics
You earned a like from me, because in the prologue, the way you described what was going allowed me to visualize the scene quite vividly in my head, and it was pretty strong imagery. I was intrigued as to where it was going. This followed in the subsequent chapters, and I kept wondering what it would be like if someone animated the story.
I just like the whole evil, all-powerful Twilight genre. Also, I prefer your story to Inner Demons.
2071608 we will see where she ends up
2071696 awe, thanks haha. People are hit and miss on it
2071843 yeah, you stick to my crossovers, huh...
2071852 I would love it if someone animated it haha.
2071977 prefer to it? Wow, that's a big one. Thanks
I like your story because the whole "Good person is betrayed by loved ones and turn evil as a result" is one of my favorite plot twists. As for what I wish to happen. I have yet to find a good villain vs villain story in a while.
Oh, that reminds me! Ive been meaning to tell you that I hate you
Because of you, I'm on episode 73 of Naruto you SoB.
For me it is good because it is unique, it´s the only story i have found that explains more deeply how twilight transforms into a fire pony.
2072069 thank you. Glad you enjoy it.
2072607 huh? I never tried getting you into naruto. That was attack on titan. Hahahahahaha
the original naruto?
Ps: one piece is a good show
2072866 thanks. That was one reason too. I hadn't seen any stories about that. Most would be a simple rage burst, but i figured it would be cool to make it a deep story about it.
2072950 I still blame you for reminding me it exists
2073334 hmmmmm, true haha. How do you like it so far?
Reminder, after episode I think 130 something, it turns into pure filler, so you can skip that