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Jordan179


I'm a long time science fiction and animation fan who stumbled into My Little Pony fandom and got caught -- I guess I'm a Brony Forever now.

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  • 161 weeks
    Shipping Sunset Shimmer with Sci-Twi

    I. A Tale of Two Shows When I wrote the few pieces of fiction I have set in the Equestria Girls side continuity, I wrote them from the assumption that Sunset Shimmer was heterosexual and passionate (though at first sexually-inexperienced, due to her youth at the time of entering the Humanoid world). Given this, my unfinished prequel (An Equestrian Gentlemare) was chiefly

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  • 172 weeks
    Generic Likely Equestrian Future

    This assumes a vanilla Equestrian future, rather than the specific one of the Shadow Wars Story Verse, though some of the comments apply to my SWSV as well. Generally, the SWSV Equestria advances faster than this, as can be seen by reference to the noted story.

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  • 203 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and Bite (Chapter 17, Part A)

    Chapter 17: "Alicorn Combat"

    NARRATOR (yelling):AL-i-CORN COM-BAT!!!

    (Alicorn fighters appear on either side of the screen with their Health and Power bars)

    Sounds like Fightin' Herds to me!

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  • 207 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and BIte (Chapter 16, Part B)

    Chapter 16: Slavery experience (Part B)

    It's the Slavery Experience! Get on board the ship for the onerous Middle Passage! Then get auctioned and sold away from all your friends and loved ones for a hopeless life of servitude!

    Wow, that got dark fast.


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  • 208 weeks
    Rage Review: Resist and Bite (Chapter 16, Part A)`

    Chapter 16: Slavery Experience (Part A)

    Charlie gets 1000 XP and goes up a level! He is now a Level 2 Slave!

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Apr
12th
2014

Collateral Damage is now complete. · 9:03pm Apr 12th, 2014

I have at last published the sixth and final chapter of Collateral Damage. It's the most painfully-tragic story I've ever written in my entire life about anything. One thing that this story has taught me is that tragedy all about point of view and focus -- a million deaths may be a statistic, but the deaths of two persons I characterized and then showed the effects of their deaths upon their loved ones -- that's heart-wrenching. As in wrenching my heart -- I was on the verge of tears through most of the writing of Chapters 4-6.

Oh, crap, have I really committed myself to writing about a whole freaking war in Poul Andersonesque style? Oh, damn, I'm going to have nightmares now. Teaches me not to use the "Order 66" theme and Sabaton's historical World War II Euro-metal to as writing background music.

Hope you readers like it. :twilightsmile:

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Comments ( 3 )

2004158

Indeed, and Coat of Arms. Among others. "Rise of Evil" is a good song for contemplating Queen Chrysalis, and the general heroic despair that characterizes much of the music (as in, "we may be doomed but we're fighting to the bitter end, and you won't win in the end either") works well for Ceymi.

2004158

Ceymi has Noble Demon Tragic Heroine (or Anti-Villain, or whatever you call it) written all over her carapace.

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