Sharing the Night: Status and Delays / Minor Changes Incoming · 7:01am Apr 1st, 2014
The following blog post was originally posted for April Fool's Day 2014 and should not be taken seriously.
Status and Delays
Yikes, it's been four months since the last chapter of Sharing the Night! I've said in several places that Chapter 10 is complicated, and that it's been giving me a lot of trouble, but not everyone follows me and I don't tag my story on all my blog posts like some people, so I figured I'd just throw this out there and let people know I'm still alive and still working on Sharing the Night.
As of this moment, Chapter 10 is about 5,000 words, which for me means it's about 50% done. That's better than it sounds; it means I have a good solid base to work with. The first half is always the hardest, for me.
Minor Changes Incoming
Anyway, part of this trouble is trying to fit the new direction I'm taking the cosmology of Sharing the Night in. The fact that all alicorns were originally Windegos has been extremely difficult to shoehorn into the meticulously developed system presented in previous chapters.
Celestia and Luna, of course, are pretty much canonically shown to be windegos, with it being the raw friendship-magic of the three tribes that turned them into the 'alicorns' they are today (creating the elements of harmony in the process). Somehow I missed this obvious fact on first watch, though, which is how I find myself in this situation. Still, they're easy to work in, relatively speaking.
Twilight, on the other hand, has been nothing but trouble with this change. In particular, the combined reveals that Twilight's mother is the fourth alicorn, that Twilight is only half alicorn and that the villain of the story is her stillborn brother who she's going to have to kill in order to become a full-blown alicorn for the sake of her immortal love is just so completely jarring in combination with the rest of the story, that I'm afraid it might be a lost cause.
So I'm not going to bother. I'll just go back and change the original chapters to match this new vision sometime in the future. I know this sounds bad, but I'm determined to do it right. I won't fall into the trap that so many others have. Rewrites kill projects—it's a fact—so I refuse to start on them until after I've finished the rest of Sharing the Night. There might be a slight hitch when Twilight and Luna start mentioning their previous BDSM history as a result of the new timeline, but I'm probably just being overly critical of myself. I'm sure nobody will notice a thing.
The upshot of this is I won't have to change the story's rating to mature until after the rewrites go through, as Luna is strictly in favor of abstinence during pregnancy. Whatever happens between Celestia and Twilight Velvet will stay behind closed doors, too, seeing as the story isn't about them. (Spin off? Yes/no?)
Regardless, I'm sure everything will be just fine.
tl;dr
I don't think there's any room for misunderstanding in the above, but just in case anyone is confused about what exactly is going to happen with Sharing the Night, you may consult the following chart, which should help by boiling the changes down to their simplest form. Some details may have been lost in translation, but I spent like, five minutes putting it together, so I'm going to post it.
Every last word of this is a liiiiiiiie.
I'm so sorry. I just wanted to do something.
The chapter really is half done, though.
I was very confutzed.
Then I remembered what day it was.
Celestia and Twilight Velvet, eh? Yes, I can live with that. Spinoff, please!
This is how you make an April Fool's blog. Perfection, I must say.
And take your time, I'll be here to poke whatever holes I can for you when the time does come. xD
Best April fools blog I've seen all day
April's fool blog it may be, but the Wendigo thing actually-kinda-sorta makes sense if you think about it...
I was kinda hoping this was actually info that a new chapter had a lot more progress.
ah well I guess I'll be amused.
My face perfectly mirrors your avatar Cast when reading your blog post.
Well it would if If this was any other day of the year anyway.
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Glad you liked it Truth be told, I really wasn't sure about it
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I know, right? It actually went into my random idea catalogue for a few minutes before I realized I had the 'perfect' place for it.
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Well, it is half written, and that is far more than 'half' as far as actual progress goes—that much of the blog post is true.
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Wut. Th-That's not really going to happen, is it, cause I'm not sure how I feel abo--
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I see the bullshit begins.
I'm... surprisingly fond of the idea that Celestia and Luna were Windegos before some Harmony-induced transformation.
[Edit] And if there was even a hint of humorous seriousness to that query of yes/no for the Celestia/Twilight Velvet side story...
Yes.
Goddamnit! You had me going for a minute.
edit: I hope someone makes a story out of that post.
Dammit, you nearly had me with the windigo thing. I stopped for five minutes and tried to think of what you were talking about with it being canon.
You know we love you, right, Cary?
Everyone is too ironically self-aware.
My brain kept yelling "SPOILER ALERT! SPOILER ALERT!" all the way through that blog until the comments so I was completely fooled by it. Not to mention I was sitting here trying to work through my head about the windigo -> alicorn bit. Gotta be honest, it was a bit intriguing.
I am entirely in favor of all such changes.
Happy April 1st~ It only took me until the BDSM thing to realize what was going on.
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Folks just don't understand how to April Fools. It's not about extremes, it's about subtlety. So, you win in my book for certain.
A friend or two did mention that he wouldn't mind seeing the TwiLuna BDSM thing though...
wait, are you telling me there will be no twiluna bondage? that's not a joke, it's playing with people expectation, despicable.
I'm surprised I'm the first to jump at the "during pregnancy" bit. One or both of Luna and Twilight are pregnant. Which is it? Who's the father? (Probably "Twilight is pregnant with Luna's foal", but one never knows.)
I got like 3/4 in before I realized it was a joke. I even took the stillborn part seriously (I had a funny look on my face, though). I'll chalk it up to just waking up. Yeah... that's it
Even knowing it was 4/1, you still had me going till about half way. Congrats, you sly devil.
Windingo to alicorn is an intresting theory... that could make for an intresting story. And i cant wait for the next chapter. I just binge read the whole story in two days. And i want more.
It's believable because, let's be honest, we've all read stranger.
1971765 This is the truth. And I'd actually like to see a story based around this, too.
Well played.
1971821 dat profile pic tho!
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Mine?
Heh...
2031149 nooooooo >.>|<.<.|>.>
Nightmare Moon's.
Wow... I was reading this and I was so confused...
Then I read the bottom and everything was right with the world again.
Seriously though - You better change this story's rating to mature and add in some Twiluna BDSM: