• Member Since 26th Oct, 2013
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Yonah21


I write POE's, and HIE's mostly. I hope you all enjoy my work.

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  • 448 weeks
    Story

    So sorry for the delays. I keep getting distracted by my novel which is almost at the 8th chapter. I'm not abandoning my fanfic, I just am having trouble still. Just letting you know.

    6 comments · 572 views
  • 454 weeks
    To Return Home :)

    Letting you know I am making major progress with the story. I am about halfway done or so with the newest chapter :twilightsmile:

    3 comments · 327 views
  • 454 weeks
    Ten Little Critters

    Ten little critters, all gathered and looking fine.
    One choked on pride, and then, there was nine.

    Nine little critters, practically served on a plate.
    One spoke poorly, and then there were eight.

    Eight little critters, those passed now in heaven.
    One took fright, and then, there were seven.

    Seven little critters, one surrounded by chicks.
    One roused anger, and then there were six.

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    11 comments · 331 views
  • 454 weeks
    Cue evil laugh

    Thanks to my good friend RedShirt047 I have something planned for you all. A little mystery. And no, it's not something I mentioned in the past that I won't really do. I've already put work into this and got the plot all together.

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    4 comments · 317 views
  • 454 weeks
    Story

    Okay. I want to let you know a reason why this story has been delayed so much. A big part is because a while ago my brother rather blasted the recent chapter I was going to put up. It really crushed my spirits, which made me stop writing it. Figured you all need to know. That being said, I got a page done by now in the newest chapter. And yes, I still plan for the scene to be a bit similar to

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Jan
3rd
2014

Messed up · 1:53am Jan 3rd, 2014

I was going to upload the next chapter, but after reading it, I noticed that Rainbow Dash went beyond brash and her typical self and got darn right mean, so I have to do some major rewriting. Pretty much redoing the whole chapter. Sorry..... I just don't want to put out a crappy chapter.

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Comments ( 13 )

I can understand that entirely. Nobody wants a crappy chapter. :twilightsmile:

1676427 Thanks. I agree. I always prefer an author take their time than rush out a bad chapter.

1676430 I used to rush a lot, so I see where you're coming from. I still do it on occasion, but am slowly shedding the habit. :twilightsmile:

1676434 Good to hear. How long have you been writing?

1676450 On here, since last New Year's. But I have been writing on other sites since 13.

1676456 Oh. What was the first thing you put online?

1676550 I wrote about my roleplays on Deviantart. ._.

Do what you have to! As long as the story keeps going, I don't really mind. Everyone has a different view on how the ponies act.
Also, don't try to start another story until you've finished this one. One thing at a time. Keep at that pace, and eventually you'll be able to handle two or more at the same time. I tried doing about ten... most are now deleted.

Have fun and happy new year!

1676552 Ah, gotcha. My first story was a Dragon Age Origins self insert. It started out good, no tropes or anything, good quality, but when I re-read it I noticed it was, well... Crappy, to be honest, in the last 20 chapters I did. So I discontinued it, and started this one.

1676585 And a happy New Year to you too!

YB

Well, congrats for having the will and the energy to rewrite it almost entirely. Sincerely, that's... badass. (Can't find a better word :p )
I mean, I know people (including me!) who would have simply inserted a clumsy fix somewhere in the story to try to explain it.
And thanks for telling us, and not making your readers wait without news. That's appreciable, too :3

And happy new year :3

1677533 A happy New Year to you too :) .

And yeah, I just noticed that it dragged on far too long at parts. And thanks to the rewrite you will get a little bit at the main plot I got an idea for. It is not just the ponies being small, cute, and getting into trouble.

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