13th May. Random thoughts, writing, music and pony. · 5:50am May 13th
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Deathtoponies!
Take it away Death!
Thanks abrony, so"
sex with ponies
did you ever want to fuck pponies?
I did not...
I wanted them to die instead
But then, I thought...
They are not only distantly like real horses
And are a bit like fairies
Who would die due to sex
This is why you should read my friend's fiction!
It is all about a cute thing
It may look like a pony
But it is still dtf
When you receive an awkward criticism in a review, be like this guy! 
you Alzrius!
Special flaw The set up between Sonata and Lex, while believable, reads to me as a trope.
I wasn't going to call this out, because people always get so heated about this stuff, and they shouldn't do, as it's totally understandable, but a few places got a bit much:Maybe Lex would get captivated by how cute she looked when she was embarrassed, and forget all about being angry at her?
I'd have to hand in my sisterhood membership if I didn't call it out
For what it's worth, I like to think that my writing gets better over time as the story progresses (whether or not it actually does is something else altogether
). With regard to Sonata being a bit trope-y...I plead "existing character," since even though she doesn't have much official screentime, she's long since become FiM's poster child for an adorably airheaded ditz (Derpy notwithstanding). That and the whole "we will be adored" thing.
Check out the full review here
Is none of our hosiery safe from the sock-toed ungulates?
