The Power of Edits! · 9:27am Apr 20th, 2023
Great news!
The prologue and the four chapters posted have been edited, and redone! It is the same story, same outcome as you know it, but the language and writing has become so much better! At least according to myself. SoloBrony has done some amazing work, and we have been in daily discussion about the story and how to tackle certain writing paths. 
So far it has been very interesting to see the edits being done, and I have learned a lot. Now I just need to steal whatever tricks I can from SoloBrony and take all the power! Mwahahaha! 
Obviously not, but I have learned a lot, but it will take time to convert all that into writing habits. I am really looking forward to getting a move on, chapter five is already coming along nicely. If you have time, and if you have not checked it out, you should reread the edited chapters! Not for my sake, and you will loose no information by not reading them. However, it is worth it just to see the story from a whole new style. 
If you don't, you can look forward to future chapters! 
By all means, take whatever you can from what I do! Learn all you can, grow, evolve. If I can help in that capacity, that's more than enough.
Nice keeper at it and improve so There Are more story to enjoy