312825 I'm sorry, no. I really should get on that. I've been terribly busy with school and other such personal business. I will post a blog update if I begin again.

116885 Awesome, I beleive you. this is going to bre so bucking good, I can't wait for this my friend.

116867 great! And I do separate when they speak, I do a single "enter" and I serperate the paragraphs with two.
I'll explain most of everything in chapter 3, and make that longer, perhaps some misadventure to go along with it!

116774 Alright, I gotten chapter two and I still can't reply so I'll do so on here...other then seprating when another speaks as well as a few paragraphs everything is completely spotless and I love every second of it.

You keep Dash and Derpy so true to who they are it sends bucking shivers up my spine, very, very great job, seriously I love this story but the second chapter could be a bit longer.

I also want to know when Dash fell asleep and how she ended up at Derpy's house...will Dinky play a role? Can't wait untill this gets aprroved I'll be waiting for more untill then

116774 Nah you all good, just be sure you got the proper grammer and spelling fixed and that your bad ass writing has not dulled and then post it, I like the chapters to be a suprise And I can but I can't reply back to them, I trust you man, I have a feeling your not one to disappoint your friends.