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Haha, don't worry. Writing this kind of story I get people calling me LOTS of names, so I have a thick skin. Truthfully, I wouldn't be upset if you put it in the "worst story ever" category.

I'd be interested to know what you think would have made it better, but don't worry, you don't have to answer if you don't feel comfortable doing so.

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Please don't take it the wrong way, you're story is very interesting honest.
The stories that I put in this folders are those in my opinion I wished had gone differently for different reasons so again... sorry...

Nearly there?!!?!

Well flip... guess I gotta rewrite it and make it more interesting! Maybe make him red and black?

1791094 that was sarcastic... But I can respect the reason you gave. I am currently gutting the whole thing so it may not wind up going down the same path as if first planned, you mightn't find something to like next time. But either way, thanks for taking the time to read it.

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Really? I thought you wouldn't with how I describe the stories I put in there. But honestly I did find your story interesting. The only problem I had with it is I thought it could have gone another way. But its my own opinion