no shh. well you know.
send me that if you would.

1698006 I know the feel--a hefty two mentally challenged kids tried jacking my keyboard to alter one of my early crossovers, which I have covered in a blog post. If you're wondering, the story in question now has its own standalone rewrite.

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Thinking back on that i say that you are right on that i was just mad that my kid brother did that to my page.

1696973 I say, deleting the story instead of merely taking it down through the revoke submission button was a bad play on your part. I should know--I deleted a handful of my real early works.

*BANG*
That ladies and gentlemen is the sound of me becoming and only child. Will not go into all the details on that; however i will say this.
The story that was posted, was not and had not been proofread yet. So ya, you all got that part right; number two on this list is that was not the story that i wanted to start out with.

All that said thanks for the advice on what to fix now. talk about one way to get a proofreading.