As a young Pegasus guard-in-training, you've been tasked, several times, to go to Ponyville on several small occasions. During one of the tasks, you came across a white Unicorn that you simply fell in love with. It's been two years.
Pretty decent, nice introduction to the story. A little indent is nice for the beginning of each paragraph, but that is subjective. Keep up the good work.
Hopefully in about.. 4 to 5 hours, it'll be almost done, then it'll probably take a few good look-overs, a few modifications, then it should be releasable.. so...
Next chapter should be out in about 4-6 hours.
Studying and all.
Edit: Next chapter will also be Friday Night, the first clop chapter. Kinda nervous.
Unfortunately, things didn't quite work out. Next chapter might be out tomorrow night. ((Might work out like that for all the rest of the clop chapters.))
dis gun be good
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Pretty decent, nice introduction to the story. A little indent is nice for the beginning of each paragraph, but that is subjective. Keep up the good work.
Well, I am gonna keep tabs on this. And lol at Rare's admission (if it was one...).
Movement restriction.
Is that what you call it then?
Imma watching this.
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I suppose "light bondage" could have also worked, but that just seemed a bit too dirty a term to use, personally.
When's the next chapter?
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Hopefully in about.. 4 to 5 hours, it'll be almost done, then it'll probably take a few good look-overs, a few modifications, then it should be releasable.. so...
Next chapter should be out in about 4-6 hours.
Studying and all.
Edit: Next chapter will also be Friday Night, the first clop chapter. Kinda nervous.
2654349 I hope he cums inside of her!
I must consult with my gods on this one. Thom, Guy is this good stuff?
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THEN IT SHALL BE SO!!!
Nice job mate. Cheerio.
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Unfortunately, things didn't quite work out. Next chapter might be out tomorrow night. ((Might work out like that for all the rest of the clop chapters.))