As a young Pegasus guard-in-training, you've been tasked, several times, to go to Ponyville on several small occasions. During one of the tasks, you came across a white Unicorn that you simply fell in love with. It's been two years.
HA, very well-placed and clever secret, you are one tricky guy. Anyhow, the chapter is pretty nice, the description and words used for the sexual intercourse is very decent and pretty nice. Overall, the chapter is pretty nice and soft, well done. Good job on the execution. I'll be making a follow to this story now, it holds a nice promise.
New chapter! Hooray.. I think.
2660022 Clever hiding of the music link. Wonder how many people will find it.
Smart way to hide it. I found it completely by accident when my hand slipped on the touchpad.
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Enjoy the secret.
Well, the fic's interesting so far, even when I'm not really into anthro fics. (To be honest, the pic of the fic raised my interest, I love it).
Might as well give you a thumbs up and a follow on this story.
HA, very well-placed and clever secret, you are one tricky guy. Anyhow, the chapter is pretty nice, the description and words used for the sexual intercourse is very decent and pretty nice. Overall, the chapter is pretty nice and soft, well done. Good job on the execution. I'll be making a follow to this story now, it holds a nice promise.
Keep up the good work man.
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Thanks! Your kind words help my progress.
And by that I mean that the next evening will hopefully be coming out today.
Nevermind I found it it was too small to press without my s-Pen