Okay, okay. About you saying that this chapter sucks, by far this is the funniest one. It just need some polishing, editing, etc. to make it shine.

Dear god, lyra is a bitch. I wouldn't have gone to get drunk after that, I'd have just said, "fuck it, I'm killing the next pony who talks to me"

Why would Dash pee on him? XD

ok!! I got nothing here have a sexy shy
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Vahnt next chapter .-.

Oh God, oh man, oh God!

Quite the strange barf/drunk/pee/scat chapter you did there.

Uhh…

Not sure how to handle the compliment.

This chapter wasn't utter shit.

Okay.

Now to get to the other 40-odd favorites I have.

Boop.

Funny and totally not a bad chapter, I liked it, what the hell is a 17 year old doing drinking alcohol and knowing what to say? I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT "ON THE ROCKS" means.
Dat Dashie is cute as hell, I tells ya. Now Issac is dead, great job.

Way too hard to try and take this story seriously. I know that its Discord doing this to him. Is it ever gonna be explained why Discord is doing this to him before he does the rest of the Mane 6 and probably both Princesses at this this point and ends up getting blamed in the end?

I think Isaac was better off being Fluttershy's fuck toy.

bwhahahaha

Did anyone else think that when Pinkamena got introduce to the story somepony had to die?