Now that I have finished this chapter, in all general honesty.....I fucking hate this story. I really, REAAALLY don't like it. I wanna take it and chop it into bite size pieces and feed them to a baby. As soon as I finish the shit quality chapters that are left, I'm done with writing like this. The story has no plot whatsoever, it's based off of 50 movies I've seen and the style of writing is my attempt at idolizing H.G Welles' 1984. I'm not even sure if he wrote the damn book. Go read that instead of this story. As soon as I finish this no plot Mary Sue merged with Mr. Anderson type fic don't even mention this horrible, HORRIBLE story. Good fucking day.
386573 Welp this story has become an absolute cluster-fuck of shit that I cant follow, but everything before the future equestria was pretty cool to me.
I'm gonna check out some of your other works now (if you have any, i hope you do!)
Opinions of how it is so far would be helpful. At this point in the story I have no idea what to do at all.
This somewhat reminds me of the matrix. And I find it slightly hard to follow but i look forward to whatever madness you write!
Now that I have finished this chapter, in all general honesty.....I fucking hate this story. I really, REAAALLY don't like it. I wanna take it and chop it into bite size pieces and feed them to a baby. As soon as I finish the shit quality chapters that are left, I'm done with writing like this. The story has no plot whatsoever, it's based off of 50 movies I've seen and the style of writing is my attempt at idolizing H.G Welles' 1984. I'm not even sure if he wrote the damn book. Go read that instead of this story. As soon as I finish this no plot Mary Sue merged with Mr. Anderson type fic don't even mention this horrible, HORRIBLE story. Good fucking day.
possibly right about the plot, but its still amazing writing
403882 Really?
386573 Welp this story has become an absolute cluster-fuck of shit that I cant follow, but everything before the future equestria was pretty cool to me.
I'm gonna check out some of your other works now (if you have any, i hope you do!)