“So what attracted you to Trey?” Twilight began, still angry at herself for forgetting some paper as a distraction.
“Well...he’s very sweet...and he actually took the time to get to know me even though I was so shy...he invites me to things...and stuff...” she said, choosing her words carefully. She didn’t want to let on that Twilight hadn’t been doing a good job of that either. “He’s just a really nice colt.” she said, nuzzling her head into his chest. Twilight took note of that sign of affection. She’d never seen her do that to anypony other than her animals.
“Alright. When did you know you were attracted to him?”
“Well...I thought he was interesting at the first party we met at...since then, my love him for him just...grew. I don’t know exactly when I fell in love with him, all I know is that I’m glad I did.” she started, as Trey rubbed her back.
“Uh huh...and are you satisfied with Trey?”
“Satisfied?”
“Yes. Are you happy with him?”
“Oh, yes, I’m much more than happy. I don’t think I could be happy without him.” she smiled at Trey. She wished Twilight would just leave already. She wanted to get more time with him by herself.
“And just a few more questions...what has Trey done to make you feel wanted?”
“Well...” she started, looking into Trey’s eyes. “I don’t think he’s done anything to make me feel unwanted. Everything he does, from the way he talks to me, touches me, compliments me...looks at me, even. It just seems...natural. Like he genuinely wants me in his life.”
“And I do.” said Trey, smiling at her. They’d hardly been looking at Twilight, lost in their own little world. Twilight recognized this and sped things up, getting their attention again.
“Alright, and last question...would you say you two are good lovers?”
“Oh yes. He loves me and I love him very much.” she said.
“That’s not what I meant.” she said. Trey immediately understood where she was going.
“What did you mean?”
“Twilight, I don’t think that’s something we can discuss.” Trey said, trying to end the conversation.
“What’s she asking?” asked Fluttershy.
“Have you...been good lovers?”
“Oh, yes. We love each other a lot.” she smiled.
“That’s not what I mean...”
“Twilight, let’s not go there.” said Trey, a little more forecefully. She ignored his statement.
“I don’t understand...” said Fluttershy.
“Have you two...done it?”
“Done what?” asked Fluttershy. Twilight facehoofed. Trey warned her again.
“Have you two had sex?” she asked. A large, brooding silence hung over the room as Fluttershy stared at her, tears starting to come to her face. Trey stared at Twilight, angry. “I mean, I read about the sexual revolution...and you guys have been together for a while now...by studies, you guys should have...”
“Twilight.” said Trey, as Fluttershy covered her face with her hooves, hiding her tears. “You need to leave. I’ll discuss that with you later.” he said, giving her a menacing stare. Twilight then realized the error of that question. Fluttershy couldn’t handle stuff like that...why did she even ask that?
“I’m...I’m sorry.” she said, before hanging her head low, trotting out the door back home. Trey slammed the door behind her, sighing heavily as Fluttershy let out her sobs of frustration, getting lost in memories. Trey took his seat beside her on the couch again.
“Fluttershy? It’s going to be ok.” he said, putting an arm around her to comfort her.
“DON’T TOUCH ME!” she screamed at him. Trey reeled back in a slight surprise, removing his arm quickly. He sat beside her on couch in silence.
“Flutterheart...” he said.
“I’m sorry, Trey.” she managed to say between sobs. “I didn’t mean to.”
“I know. I know exactly why you did it, too. She should have known better than to ask that. I’ll be letting her have a piece of my mind later.”
“You don’t have to do that...I don’t want her to get upset...”
“Fluttershy, she upset you. I’m just going to lay it out with her. Nopony upsets my filly and gets away with it. Are you going to be ok?”
She nodded, still crying. “Just stay here...” she said, putting one hoof out to him. Trey took it with his and kissed it. She threw herself upon him, hugging him, burying her head deep in his chest while he stroked her softly, shushing her, rocking back and forth.
***
“Oh...hey Trey. Yeah, about earlier...” began Twilight as she opened her library door.
“That’s exactly what we’re here to talk about.” said Trey. “I told you we’d discuss this later.”
“Come on in...” she said. She took a seat, offering the couch to him. He said nothing, but began his tirade standing up.
“Listen. There were multiple problems with what you said. First off, why would you think asking ponies about their private lives was a good idea?”
“It was a research paper.”
“Bullshit, Twilight. You’re one of the smartest bookworms in the town and you’re writing a report without taking notes on what’s said? That’s what gave it away for me. But the bigger question is, why would you think asking somepony, who’s had that kind of a past, would be a good idea at all?”
“I didn’t mean for it to happen like that. I honestly wasn’t thinking.”
“That’s a little out of character for you, Twilight. You’re always thinking. There must have been some ulterior motive. Honestly, I think you’re trying to sabotage our relationship.” he said, taking a seat on the couch.
“No, not at all.” said Twilight, fearing her answer. How did Trey reach that conclusion?
“And let me give you something personal about myself. First off, before I say that, let me say that all the reading you’ve been doing on love won’t give you any practical knowledge. It’s something learned on the field, not read. You reading about the sexual revolution doesn’t matter. Sure, many of the colts and fillies these days are having sex more and more often, outside of wedlock. You know what? I’ve struggled my entire life trying to make sure I wasn’t like them. Not all colts are the same, Twilight.”
“I never said they were...”
“Shh. So here. This is what you need to know about me. I’m erotophobic.”
“You’re scared of sex?” she asked, shocked. She’d never heard of a male who’d been scared of sex...he certainly did defy expectations.
“Not necessarily scared. There’s some fear, yes, but it’s really more strong negative opinions about it. I have absolutely no interest in sex.”
“What is this...I don’t even...”
“And you know what else? I’m basiexic.”
Twilight raised an eyebrow. Out of all the reading she’d done, she’d never heard that word before. “What’s that?”
“Strong sexual arousal by kissing. So let me lay this out psychologically for you. I don’t like sex. Multiple reasons, I’ll get into those later. But since I don’t like sex, I have to have some other way to release myself, so to speak. Kissing is what turns me on. Personally, I think a kiss means much more than sex. So, I prefer kissing over sex. Yadda yadda yadda. Point proved?”
“Yes.” she said. She didn’t expect that from him. He seemed so...confident in himself...why wasn’t he confident in having a sex life? “How do you know you don’t like sex if you’ve never had it?” she asked, trying to trip him up.
“Because...well...I have had it. That’s how I know.”
“You...what?” So he WAS typical? He...he didn’t make sense to her anymore.
“I’ve always been against sex before marriage. Part of the way I was raised. Well, back in Canterlot, first year in college, I got my first fillyfriend. After about 6 months, I decided to make love to her. Even then, it wasn’t great.”
“Probably just because she didn’t know what she was doing.”
“Neither of us did. That’s not the point. Point is, shortly afterward, after about 2 weeks, she broke up with me. I decided to release my inhibitions about sex, and foolishly made love to her thinking we’d last longer. After that, I was so grief stricken. We were both virgins, and since I was raised to know better than that, I felt terrible. Worst part was, I feel like I took something from her that wasn’t mine to take.”
Twilight raised an eyebrow. Most colts never felt bad about taking somepony’s virginity. It was almost like a trophy for them. “You...felt bad about it?”
“Yes. Strange I know, since all colts are the same and consider virginity trophies of sorts. Certainly there’s not one single colt in all of Equestria that may feel bad. Certainly not, Twilight. The books say we’re all the same. Must be right, hm?”
“I...don’t know what to say really. I don’t understand why you’re erotophobic...you did have sex. If you were so scared of it, why did you do it?”
“Because I decided to put away my fear for her. I thought my fear would go away. After she left me, I was so overcome with grief that I settled back into my old mindset. Besides...sex is just so...invasive. I don’t like being invasive.”
“You...I...what?”
“I know. Hard to imagine there might be an exception to the social rules, right, Twilight? I think you should think about that before boldly making accusations. Besides...” he said, hopping up off the couch towards the door. “Fluttershy was invaded once. I’m not going to let it happen again. See you later, Twilight.” he said, walking out the door. He was seething with rage. He’d never been that angry at anypony other than himself before, but...he felt she deserved it. He trotted back home, getting ready for Fluttershy to visit yet again.
Twilight sat in her chair, dumbfounded. There was an...exception? There were no exceptions in math, why was there an exception in love?
“Sounds like he let you have it.”
Twilight turned to face Spike, who poked his head from the kitchen.
“Guess you heard that, huh?”
“Oh yeah. Why can’t you just leave him alone about her, Twilight? What did he ever do to you?”
‘He stole my heart...’ she said silently to herself.
“Nothing. I just got too curious for my own good. Asked all the wrong questions.”
“I think you need to leave them alone. Just stop looking for love and it will find you.”
“But what about the rules? They’re breaking every one of them!”
“All’s fair in love and war, Twilight.”
“Where did you hear that?”
“It’s an old saying. Just take a step back and let them love each other. They’re not hurting anypony.”
“He’s hurting me.” she said. She immediately covered her mouth with her hoof, realizing what she said. Spike raised an eyebrow.
“So THAT’S what’s really going on.” he said.
I did waited a long time for this one! Great job man!
excellent I can't wait till the next chapter!
You work really hard on this! I've been waiting for the next chapter for a while and it didn't dissapoint. Can't wait for the next one!
You know, Trevor, I wasn't exactly sure what you were talking about until I saw your name. Since Trey and Trevor (I've been called every T name in the book. Tiffany, even.) Now I realize you were talking in third person. Slightly confusing for me. Thanks for the comments though. I'm working on different sub plots, but holy shit, over 600 views in a day? I didn't expect it to spike up like that O.o
Anyways, thanks for the continued support, everypony. Like I said, my OC is, essentially, me. Yep, I'm erotophobic. Sue me. I'll try and have a new chapter within a week. Band has a very busy schedule this month.
Trey
I just now noticed that I got featured. ALRIGHT!!! BROHOOVES ALL AROUND!!!
BEST CHAPTER YET KEEP IT UP DUDE!
Production shall be halting. This story has received too many negative reviews. It's poorly rated and as a result, I'm canceling it.
^ This guy.
Let me just say that a long time ago, I never intended for this story to get as popular as it did. I thank everypony for their support of my story, though it has its high points and low points. I have nopony to congratulate more than my fans. Without fans, literature is just writing. Thanks again, everypony.
Trey Love, "Bandmaster" Trey
*you're. But yeah, you are.
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Honestly, that's how I feel the story's been going. It can only go so far before you have to deviate from it. People keep wanting more though, so I have to come up with...things...to expand the life of the story. If it were up to me, I probably would have ended it after chapter 5 or 6. But I got a fan club, woopie.
more opaque, really. She kinda changes in and out.
Do want more
Trevor, this story does represent me, too. My ex gf and I had a bit of a fast start. This story, in a sense, almost mirrors elements of (Harmony!!!) my life.
You wanna know the only thing that sucks about finding a new awesome fic to read? Catching up and finding out that it's incomplete. Yeah, that bites... HARD. (In English, it translates roughly to KEEP IT UP! TREVOR HAS TO HAVE MOAR!)
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
Hell, I gave you 33,000 words. You consumed it voraciously, Trevor. Trey will write more, absolutely.
17891 It would have only taken one a couple of hours to read, if that, but one had a stupid Accounting class to go to... Anyhoof, aside from the one chapter that one left a somewhat... scathing comment on, the story has been great overall! One is fairly open-minded about OCs, since one has a story with several as well, and Trevor is glad that he gave this one a chance as well! (Of course, it helps that Flutters is the mane character next to the OC! XD Flutters makes EVERYTHING better! 8D)
~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria
p.s. No need to rush the next chapters at all. After all, quality over quantity!
I knew the Big Mac chapter would throw some Big Mac fans off, but a story needs a conflict. Trust me, there will be more conflicts. There will be more happy moments. There's only so much I can do before it gets out of hand but you know. Everyone seems to like it so far, so thanks for the support! So you next chapter!
Trey
hate to ask but you wouldn't happen to be an Aspie would you?
Not sure what an aspie is, so I'm going to say no.
alright so I gotta admit the latest chapter turned a bit weird
aspie is a sort of unofficial 'nickname' for people with Aspergers Syndrome, i was asking because i am one and i noticed that several aspects of my life and my idealogies on relationships and other things are extremely similar to what you have written about your own life in the story.
btw excellent job keep up the good work
I think aspie might be a bit derogatory, but yes, I do have slight Aspergers. Glad you recognized it. Indeed, I am an "aspie" so to speak. Just slightly.
don't worry it is not a derogatory name it was actually created by the group autism aotearoa as an abrieviated form to make aspergers sound less.... "clinical"
i agree, it was an interesting way to get a first kiss
Yeah. I nned to try half of the stuff I write though :P
Thank you! I try.
after reading this i have concluded that, as a true gentlecolt, you make a good couple and fluttershy truely loves you. I wish you two the best in your relationship. HOWEVER! if you hurt her i will personally hunt you down and see to it that you suffer greatly. no pressure ^_^
Sir, I would never do anything to intentionally hurt Fluttershy. Er...Flutterheart.
love the fic, only concern, you said people at one point. THERE ARE NO PEOPLE IN PONIES!!!!!
I said people? WHEN???
18291 shortly after trey confronts twilight about how she was wrong in asking suck questions,
“Listen. There were multiple problems with what you said. First off, why would you think asking PEOPLE about their private lives was a good idea?”
P.S. I made my avatar the way I picture Trey.
Close Josh, but my avatar is the way Trey ACTUALLY looks. You're not far off. Just white coloring for the mane.
Welp, just started and finished this story at work. I'm pretty much sas now as i got nothing to read at the moment. ( sorry for bad english fyi ) The story itself was nice, i personaly find it too good to be true, but hey, dont we all wish for the best in love? Anyway, that bigmac part suprised me at best, yet i understand the importance to a story. Everybody is foolish when young and in love, for the best and the worst. Twilight, on the other hand, is pretty much high there on my pony list. I was afraid of how you were portraying her at first. Last few chapters, showing more of how she's trying to understand something new with her bookworm personality, instead of showing a bitch part trying to ruin true love, made me happy. I was afraid she would be a bad pony in this story, and trying to find that pretty much hook me up for my whole 8h shift between calls. Altho i'm not a big fan of self inserted OC ( is that how you say it? ) shipping with one of the mane6, your story pretty much made me crave more! You did a good job at it and i cannot wait for an update! Thank you for this nice story, you did a great job!
18322 Oh don't mistake me sir. I have known that your avatar was based off your character, you mentioned in a comment near the beginning of this fic, but as I read through I see him having a softer look. One who cares for ones well being, a more mild pony.
when I see your avatar, I see a pony whos ready for excitement, a pony who wants a fast paced lifestyle. I have nothing against it, I just feel that Trey has a softer appearence.
As for the white coat. I have never been a big fan of it, seems a bit to obtrusive.
Sorry rarity.
Anyways, i am simply expressing my opinion.
P.S. quick work on the error, nice.
Well...maybe it's the youngsters, but the topic of sex isn't exactly rated E for everyone, but then again, times change....I guess
Read the 16 chapters ... I like it, making me smile all the time
Only two things ...
Why bigmac ?
Why twillight ?
But I understand .
I love this story, cant wait 2 read more tomorrow night :D AND EVERYPONY. 5 STARS, WE NEED 2 BRING THE RATING UP!!!
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basiexic.....wtf is that a typo cause i cant find the definition any where. just wondering.
Twilight SOOOOOO deserved that I feel bad for fluttershy
Screw it. I can't hold it in so im gonna release it all at once. Be prepared..... SQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Oh and brohoof.
twi got powned
YES!!! Trey rules. High-five for exceptions!
*high fives*
way to go trey! i still cant get a grip on ertocphobia though i have seen that twice? i think twice maybe three times in yesterday and
today i was on omegle and got into a conversation with a fine gentlemen who had that issue. i feel quite sorry for you. if you do not want
me feeling apologetic about then you have my condolences.
wau I feel the emotion put in this chapter than any other man. I really can relate to Trey in some things. but man this is really.... how may I put this. ummm... well I don't know how to explain it, but I can really feel you in Trey's place. My eyes got watery in this chapter a lot.