Laughed so hard at the end I forgot to breathe myself, Gods this was perfect, DERPY!!!!!! Loved it very, very much, you just made my night Damn, for a second though Spike was going to die
the first story here did it for me way more than the others, although it got pretty weird when spike randomly jammed his first in... yeah
anyway
honestly, i feel like this story, as a treatise on the subject of squishy butts, is hampered by your unwillingness to be more salacious in your description. i can only read about a butt so many different ways before it gets awkward and unfulfilling.
the first story sort of hooked me until it got weird, but the second person stuff definitely felt weaker, and, again, unfulfilling. i'm not expecting you to start writing porn, but it bears mentioning if the subject of focus is extrapolation on butt after butt after butt
I understand completely where you're coming from, Mr. Darf, and I don't disagree.
I asked myself a number of times "Why am I posting this? Why am I writing this? What am I trying to do?"
The answers are not especially impressive. I mostly wanted to write anything, just to stay in practice. Secondarily, as is often the case, I just wanted to see if I could pull it off.
I suppose I see it something like a theme and variations piece: start with the butt, add a concept, then try something different the next time, each story drawing a slightly different picture.
In the end, I posted them despite my reservations because -- hey, why not, right? Perhaps they could offer someone a few minutes of entertainment (and maybe get some new watchers and residual views for my other stories -- mission more-or-less failed in that respect... Oh well.)
Though I must disagree with you regarding the 'weirdness'. I often like when stories get weird. Keeps things nice and unpredictable.
In any case, I appreciate your continued readership, Mr. Darf. Perhaps one of these days I'll get off my butt and write something truly satisfying.
Awesome.
HAH XD
He'll he doesn't even try and he gets laid.
Heh.
Reading this for the Spike featured ones, snarkiness is always fun.
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It's true; the first story was indeed inspired by that very picture series.
In fact, story #4 may seem rather familiar as well.
Nice. Didn't have to do a thing and still got lucky with the ladies.
Laughed so hard at the end I forgot to breathe myself, Gods this was perfect, DERPY!!!!!! Loved it very, very much, you just made my night Damn, for a second though Spike was going to die
"Awesome"
Rock on Spike, rock on
Think you could make a story about Trixie's great and powerfully out of shape flank?
Please?
This whole chapter is based off this image, isn't it..?
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You know it, chappie.
Always on the lookout for inspiration, after all
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Lol, that is the best way to react to the situation.
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I had a feeling it was.
the first story here did it for me way more than the others, although it got pretty weird when spike randomly jammed his first in... yeah
anyway
honestly, i feel like this story, as a treatise on the subject of squishy butts, is hampered by your unwillingness to be more salacious in your description. i can only read about a butt so many different ways before it gets awkward and unfulfilling.
the first story sort of hooked me until it got weird, but the second person stuff definitely felt weaker, and, again, unfulfilling. i'm not expecting you to start writing porn, but it bears mentioning if the subject of focus is extrapolation on butt after butt after butt
just my two cents
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I understand completely where you're coming from, Mr. Darf, and I don't disagree.
I asked myself a number of times "Why am I posting this? Why am I writing this? What am I trying to do?"
The answers are not especially impressive. I mostly wanted to write anything, just to stay in practice. Secondarily, as is often the case, I just wanted to see if I could pull it off.
I suppose I see it something like a theme and variations piece: start with the butt, add a concept, then try something different the next time, each story drawing a slightly different picture.
In the end, I posted them despite my reservations because -- hey, why not, right? Perhaps they could offer someone a few minutes of entertainment (and maybe get some new watchers and residual views for my other stories -- mission more-or-less failed in that respect... Oh well.)
Though I must disagree with you regarding the 'weirdness'. I often like when stories get weird. Keeps things nice and unpredictable.
In any case, I appreciate your continued readership, Mr. Darf. Perhaps one of these days I'll get off my butt and write something truly satisfying.
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'Tis the power of the Swag, good sirs
I demand ghey HIE with Big Mac
I guess you could say...
Put's on sunglasses and then another pair over the first.
He handled the situation!
Yeah!
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It's been done at least once already twice now that I think about it.