WOOOW you took preening to a completely new level, i was suppose to meet up with my boyfriend 30 minutes ago but i just couldnt stop reading.... his gonna be so upset.... but i dont regret nothing XD great chapter
Utter defeat in awesomeness This is just too good of a chapter I like what you did with the preening, it has helped me understand it a bit more better now Continue on My Good Sir / Ma'am 5 moostaches
I was like, clop... theres no clop here. Then the preening got kinky. It wasn't in the basic actions but the emotions and details that it went from fillyfriend preening her partner to WOW heated preening scene! Very original in how you pulled it all off.
I've never read (or written) such a heated Flutterdash preening session before. I know there is plenty of potential for a kinky preening scene between these two, but I feel like you've just left anything I could possibly write miles behind. It was just astounding.
DON'T GO THERE!!!!
Touching and original
Very adorable cloppy chapter
Fluttershy was so intense! Loved it!
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WOOOW you took preening to a completely new level, i was suppose to meet up with my boyfriend 30 minutes ago but i just couldnt stop reading.... his gonna be so upset.... but i dont regret nothing XD
great chapter
Utter defeat in awesomeness
This is just too good of a chapter I like what you did with the preening, it has helped me understand it a bit more better now
Continue on My Good Sir / Ma'am
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Should've...sent...a poet...
Wow... that chapter...
I was like, clop... theres no clop here.
Then the preening got kinky. It wasn't in the basic actions but the emotions and details that it went from fillyfriend preening her partner to WOW heated preening scene! Very original in how you pulled it all off.
I've never read (or written) such a heated Flutterdash preening session before. I know there is plenty of potential for a kinky preening scene between these two, but I feel like you've just left anything I could possibly write miles behind. It was just astounding.
The power of preening is a very amazing thing.
Daaayyyyuuuummm
This. Was. EXCELLENT!
b-but...the ponies!
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