Macintosh braves the Ghost Rim in order to rescue his sister, while Princess Luna and her royal guard attempt to keep vicious cutthroats at bay.
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Will... I'm thinking Iron Will. Also, buck yeah Gilda!
I got sad when this ended. Can't wait for more.
Aww yeah, starting to pick up x) Can't wait for the next chapter.
This is a good story and all, but I like the Laughing Shadow Better. Still, I suspect this is going be a much shorter story than The Laughing Shadow based on how much progress has been made in comparatively fewer words.
I'm actually rather interested in seeing how you're gonna handle the upcoming conflict between the tribal-royal guard alliance, and Gilda's band of pirates. I mean, other than 'they suddenly stopped wanting to fight and talked it over' it seems like it can only end up more interesting. Also, slightly surprising this is Gilda's band of pirates and not Iron Will's. He seemed better suited to a leadership role than Gilda to me. When I saw her tagged I was expecting her to be a random mercenary or something, not an antagonist with an army of henchman.
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As the author of TLS and all around greedy man, this fills my heart with joy. It's great knowing my solo work is appreciated.
As for 2410328, are you sure? As Jack in this story uses a Smith & Wesson Model 500, a 5 round revolver that fires .50 caliber bullets. I know this is a .50 cal for a fact, as a friend of mine is a gun nut and I've taken that thing to the range. Regarding Mac, it's a bit shaker, but his gun is modeled after the IMI Desert Eagle, Mark XIX, a variation of which fires .50 action express rounds.
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Okay, that is a stupidly big gun. I stand corrected.
Also, I'll admit to ignorance in the Mark XIX vs Mark I and Mark VII range of the desert eagle.
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Thankfully, Merc has already corrected you, but come on yourself. Before you accuse us, make sure you know what you're talking about yourself, y'know? We do do our research. At the least, I do. While, yes, in the Heistverse in general we use a bit of action movie realism in cases, in others we strive to be realistically correct.
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This is a side story, so it'll be a little bit looser, a bit more fun rather than serious (though expect plenty of seriousness), so it's not really fair to compare it to TLS. Diamond in the Rough would be a better comparison to TLS, and even then, it's probably not a fair comparison there either.
Still, TLS is a bloody fantastic story, so good on you. Merc is, as always, one of the best author's sadly unknown on this site. Keep supporting the guy, he deserves it and then some.
Added to Twilight's Library, on bookplayer's recommendation.
Ooh Gilda, now things are getting interesting.