I L- Lov... Lo-Lov... How Am I Going To Do This?
Fluttershy awakens in a comfy and soft bed. Her eyes flutter open and she see the love of her life, Rarity. "Good morning Rarity. Did you sleep well?"
"Good morning. I slept fabulously with you here. My heart beats faster each time I`m with you and you just complete me darling. I am generous, but you are even more so. You have generously given me your heart and that`s more than I have ever wanted." Fluttershy began crying.
"R- Rarity it`s too early to be um... poetic. It was b- beautiful though. I mean, I cherish you. Being able to wake up and see your big, beautiful, blue eyes is great. I can`t imagine living my life without you... Rarity. I- I know that I may be sort of um... shy, but you bring out the best in me and I feel like I`m..." Falling in love with you. Come on! Say it! Fluttershy don`t be so shy! "...The happiest when I`m with you." I`m so angry at myself that I could do the stare... at myself? No, that wouldn`t work. Never mind I guess.
"I feel the same way about you! Would you like to go out to breakfast? We could stay at home though, if you would prefer to do that."
"Um... how about we... go out to breakfast. I think. I am not really sure, I`m sorry. You choose, if that`s all right with you."
"Darling! I don`t care! I know that you want to make me happy, but you are my fillyfriend! You need to make decisions in this relationship too!" When she said 'relationship', Fluttershy`s heart skipped a beat.
Relationship?! Yay! Well, I mean we are living together. We are progressing in this relationship, but we still haven`t said I love you yet. Wait! We haven`t said I love you yet?! Rarity wants me to be a part of this, I need to tell her. It should be romantic. She looked up at an impatient Rarity. Oh my gosh! She`s looking at me! I need to answer!
"I would like to go to Ponyriffic Pancakes, if it`s okay-" No. "Let`s go to Ponyriffic Pancakes, darling?"
"Sure! Sounds great! Also, good job using darling! I guess some of my fabulosity has rubbed off on you!" She gave Fluttershy a quick kiss and then got up to take a shower.
Fluttershy watched Rarity take off her robe. Her eyes slowly drifted down to her flank. "Enjoying the show?" Fluttershy shook herself out of her dazed state.
"Yeah... I MEAN NO! Yes? No? ...yes." Rarity giggled at her confused fillyfriend.
"I am your fillyfriend, it`s fine to 'check me out'. I`m not going to lie and say that my mind hasn`t gone there with you." Fluttershy blushed. Rarity began doing a little sexy dance thing specifically to embarrass Fluttershy. This put Fluttershy over the edge. Her face was as red as Big Mac and she felt like she needed some air. Rarity slowly stepped into the shower. When did she even turn it on?
Rarity smiled and then shut the shower curtain. Fluttershy could still see Rarity`s silhouette. She couldn`t help herself. She slowly got up off the bed and inched closer and closer to the beckoning shower. She pulled back the curtain and stepped into the awesome shower. Rarity wrapped her arms around Fluttershy and kissed her. The two ponies began kissing passionately. Fluttershy pulled away and hugged Rarity. She gave her a nose nuzzle and then stepped out of the shower.
"You look really pretty when you`re um... wet. YOU LOOK GOOD ALL THE TIME THOUGH! I didn`t mean that you aren`t pretty! You`re the prettiest mare ever! Prettiest pony ever! Except for maybe Celestia... I mean um! Uh! You heard nothing! Oh geez..."
"Fluttershy, don`t get yourself all worked up. It was a nice compliment. I would say the same thing to you. And Celestia undoubtedly has the best mane and body shape. You were starting to sound like Pinkie Pie for a second there."
"Well Pinkie and I are both played by Andrea Libman."
"What was that dear? Didn`t quite catch that."
"Uh... your mane looks so pretty!"
"Awww! Thank you! That`s so sweet!" Phew! That worked out.
"We can dry off and then um... go."
"Sounds lovely Fluttershy!" She quickly dried of her mane and coat. She hadn`t done anything to it, yet it looked perfect to Fluttershy. Meanwhile, Fluttershy was so busy admiring Rarity`s hair that she forgot to dry off her own coat. She dried the ends of her mane and tail and then shook off for the rest. The two mares smiled at each other, grabbed their purses and then headed out the door.
"Um... Rarity, can we walk there. If it`s okay with you that is."
"How about we teleport half way and then walk the rest. I don`t want to walk that far without my special shoes. I could hurt myself. You don`t want that do you?" YOU?! IN PAIN?! NOT GOOD! NOT GOOD! I don`t want that to happen to Rarity. I need to be a good fillyfriend and accommodate Rarity. Stupid Fluttershy, wanting to walk the whole way.
"NO! I DON`T EVER WANT YOU TO BE IN PAIN! YOU DESERVE THE VERY BEST! I could fly you there." Rarity thought about the last time Fluttershy tried to fly somepony somewhere. 
"Uh, you know what, let`s just walk there."
"A- Are you sure?"
"Absolutely positive love~!" Fluttershy shrugged. She offered her hoof to her fillyfriend and she gladly took it. They walked hoof in hoof with Rarity`s head leaning on Fluttershy`s shoulder and their hearts filled with the joy of being with one another.
Wait! She called me 'love'! Does she love me? Is she going to say it soon?! I have to tell her! Now! ...or at the restaurant... or at the house or- NO! Fluttershy, you can do this! "R- Rar- Rarity... I- I wanted t- to tell you that I- I-" She was cut off by Rarity`s sudden outburst.
"Are you okay?! You are shaking like a leaf! You seem like you are scared or something. You can tell me anything."
"I- I love... I love-" *SIGH* "...your purse."
"That`s all? Why was it so hard to get that off your chest?"
"I am um... jealous? Your purse is just so pretty that I like it more than mine? Um... yeah, that." Rarity wrapped her arms around Fluttershy`s neck.
"You don`t have to be jealous! What`s mine is yours! Would you like to trade?"
"No, I`m fine. You can keep your..." She looked at the tag. "...GUCCI PURSE?! Doesn`t this cost like 1,000 bits?! Has this one even come out yet?!"
"Well I work with Photo Finish, Hoity Toity and Silver Glimmer, not to mention that I know the princess herself. So, I have a few connections. Isn`t it just fabulous?!"
"It`s really... nice Rarity. As I was saying before, this beautiful purse is yours."
"Okay then." Rarity looked up. "Hey! We`re already here! And my hooves don`t hurt! As Rainbow would say, 'EPIC'!" Fluttershy sighed.
I- I couldn`t say it. The moment was perfect. The whole purse things was... um... awkward. I messed it all up. Hopefully, I get another good moment. Hopefully, I DON`T MESS IT UP THIS TIME! I`m so upset that I could scream! She looked at Rarity walking into Ponyriffic Pancakes. Well, maybe I can`t shout. I could shout in my head. That`s just... weird though. Hmph...
"Aren`t you coming Fluttershy?"
"What? Um... yeah. I mean yes, yes, I will be in in a second." Rarity walked over to a table and sat down, but not before thoroughly wiping it down with a clean rag.
"Hehehe!" She couldn`t hold in her giggles. Rarity, you`re such a neat fanatic. Fluttershy took a seat opposite to the side Rarity was sitting on.
"What are you going to order?"
"Well, I was going to order the-"
"The waiter`s coming over!" A young mare with a messy mane walked over to them, she seemed like a teenager. She was probably working there to earn some bits for college or to waste on shopping.
"Hello, what can-" She stopped to find her quill. She scrambled around for a while until she finally found it. "HAHA! I- I mean, what can I get you?"
"Are you okay darling? You seem a bit flustered."
"Well, this is my first week here, I have mid-terms so I am super busy, I have been staying up late studying, I have to take care of my little brother all the time and my parents are getting a divorce so they are being really annoying. Everypony knew that it was just a matter of time before they finally broke it off. I was just hoping that I could move out before it happened. My little brother has gotten quiet recently because of all the fighting, I think that it`s getting to him. Also, my best friend is having major issues with her coltfriend. Oh, and I don`t have a date to the dance." Fluttershy and Rarity stared at her in shock.
"Oh, that sounds awful! Would you like to sit with us?"
"I can`t, I need to work. I just have the weight of the world on my shoulders. I- It`s just so much..." She broke out into tears. She buried her face into Fluttershy`s coat and mane. She didn`t mind one bit, she wanted this poor mare to feel better.
"What`s your name?"
"My name is Sweetie Swirl."
"First things first, everypony`s first week at a job is tough, especially if it`s your very first job. Mid-terms will be over soon and you seem like a smart kid so try to ease off the studying just a little, somepony who falls asleep during a test isn`t going to get a good grade. Try to hang out with your brother by doing fun things, get him to feel better. Divorces are tough on families, just make sure that you stay strong and try to help everypony, they feel just as bad as you do. Try to comfort your friend, once she`s done you can vent your problems to her. You will listen to each other`s problems and work to get through them. As for the date to the dance, I think that it will work out, you are a lovely mare who has a bright future ahead of you. If you don`t find a date then go with friends. Everything will work out, don`t you worry."
Rarity stared at Fluttershy in her element, making people feel better, whether they are an animal, pony or draconequus! Fluttershy hugged the mare and then helped her stand back up.
"Now, go and have a great life, don`t let anything ruin your day."
"Thanks, now what would you like to order?"
"I will take an order of two pancakes with OJ."
"I would like some toast and hay bacon with whole milk." Sweetie Swirl smiled and then turned to tell the chef what they want. Rarity leaned across the table and planted a kiss on Fluttershy`s lips. Fluttershy smiled and felt like the moment was finally right. There was peace and quiet, they had just kissed and she had a good feeling.
"Rarity."
"Yes?"
"I love you. I`m in love with you. I`m head over heels in love with you. You`re the only one for me. I have always loved you, even when I didn`t know it yet. You are the love of my life and I can`t imagine a world without you. You make me better and you make me happier. You make me feel like there are butterflies in my stomach. You are the only one that make me feel hot, embarrassed, happy, elated and confused at the same time. Rarity, you mean the world and more to me. I love you more than my heart can love." Rarity began crying.
"I LOVE YOU TOO~!" She wrapped her in a tight hug and then kissed her passionately and deeply. They ignored the hustle and bustle of the diner, all that mattered once again was there love. They stayed that way for a long period of time. They didn`t care if their public display of affection grossed anypony out. They were in love and love is a powerful thing.
Sweetie walked over with their food and saw the two of them hugging and kissing each other. "Awww!" She walked over to them and put down the food slowly, as not to alarm them. "Your food is here if you care." They broke the kiss and looked at her and the extremely appetizing food.
"Thanks, looks great."
"You`re welcome. Also, you two are cute together. Like kindness and generosity, both nice things." They laughed, why did she choose to compare those two things! It was such a coincidence.
"Actually we are kindness and generosity."
"How? What do you- OHMYGOSH! You are the elements of harmony! Fluttershy of kindness and Rarity of generosity! I should have recognized you guys! They taught us about you in school! The elements of harmony helped to defeat Discord, Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis and Sombra! You are legends!"
"We are famous?!"
"Well, duh!"
"Here that Fluttershy?! We are famous!"
"Cool!"
"May I take a picture with you mares?" Rarity nodded. They posed and Sweetie snapped the pic. She beamed and then skipped away.
"She is nice." Fluttershy nodded. They began eating because they were famished. "MMMMMMMM..." They ate their food and ended up with syrup covered faces. The two mares smiled and cleaned themselves up. The two of them paid and then began walking home.
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It was Spike who played a major role into stopping Sombra.
Also I can't believe Fluttershy said Gucci.
2453328 I know that, but the main six organized the ceremony, found the crystal, turned some of the crystal ponies back into their happy forms and tried to defeat Sombra. Fluttershy said Gucci because she has a 'freaky knowledge' of fashion things.
2453464 Shy has a freaky knowledge of sewing, not fashion. Her dress design showed she had next to no concept of fashion itself, just how the clothing was put together.
2455612 I know that. Applejack said that she has a "Freaky knowledge" with sewing. I was just making a pony reference. It`s like when people say "The fun has been doubled!", "Yay!" or "20% cooler in 10 seconds flat."
2456062 Which is perfectly fine, but you're attributing a characteristic to Fluttershy (knowledge of fashion) that not only has no canonical basis, but is actually disproved in the show. As Steel Resolve pointed out with 'Shy's self-designed Gala dress, she knows how to put the fabric together, but she doesn't know what looks good.
2460649 She knew what french couture was. She was a model. She didn`t design her dress, she just got a dress that was french so she assumed that it would look good. She made Rarity`s dress. She has some knowledge of fashion, whether it be good or bad she would still know what Gucci was. I didn`t know what it was until I looked up types of purses because I needed a company for Fluttershy to name. I can`t think of any other company. I also thought that it went with Rarity. Also, she is best friends with and dating somepony who is all about fashion, she has probably learned a lot from her. Either way, she knows what it is. You think of a name that exists that sounds ponyish, it has to be a purse company. Peace out!
This chapter was AMAZING
2462863 Thank you! I love how happy you get each time you read a new chapter!
I've read almost all of the chapters like 5 times XD
2462925 That`s commitment!
2472228 Yes, a sequel. I want to tell you, but telling you the title would ruin it. Also, you haven`t finished this story yet. I am writing that once I finish this one. I am also going to make a spinoff with Angel and his bunnyfriend Buttercup. They were mentioned quickly in the story a few times. The actual sequel is too important to tell you about. Sorry! If you really want to know I could tell you something in private messages.
Hm, a named character? Why do I get the feeling that she's going to be an important character eventually?
2479079 Oh, you mean Sweetie Swirl? She is a real pony. I just used the character. She won`t be in it again. I might possibly put in a really, really, really small part after a few chapters though. Here`s a picture of her:
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...But how would we ever know what happened to her? In a spinoff?
2498643 Well, she was kind of just a filler. Something to make the chapter have some excitement and make it longer. I don`t think that I will make a spinoff, but it`s an idea that I may do something with. I might add a smile or something in a later chapter that tells you that everything`s working out or something.
Update? XD
2550063 I will try to write a chapter today. I`m sorry that it`s taking so long! I`ve just been busy writing other stories, going to different parties for my cousin who`s getting married and my birthday is Tuesday so I have a lot of stuff to do.
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married,huh?Tell him I said congrats
2552397 Thank you for saying that! My cousin will be happy to hear that!
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...I suppose that works.
I will post a chapter for this as soon as I can! I didn`t realize how long it had been since I had written one! I will write one tomorrow!
270628 Indeed.
Dude, no offense, but WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!
2967716 Do you mean in the last chapter you`ve read or the fact that I haven`t posted a new chapter in three and a half months? In the last chapter Fluttershy tried to tell Rarity that she loved her and then they helped a girl feel better and that gave Fluttershy the happiness she needed to get courage. That`s when she was able to speak her mind and tell Rarity that she loves her. Like when Rainbow Dash pulled off the Sonic Rainboom she could speak freely and loudly. Now, if you`re referring to the second thing then I have an answer for that as well. I know that many people are wondering why I haven`t published a chapter in so long and here`s the answer. I`m tired of writing and I`m tired of this story. I thought about deleting my FimFiction account, but I thought that I can`t just take the stories away and I can`t be that rude so I didn`t. I thought about canceling Diamonds and Butterflies months ago. I was going to give up on it because I`m tired of writing this story, I don`t have anymore passion in the writing, it`s just simply words. I don`t want to write anymore. I want to take a break and think about what I want. I haven`t posted a new story in a month. I haven`t posted new chapters to my longer stories in 1-3 months. I wanted to just give up, but I know that I don`t want to let my fans down so that`s why I haven`t just canceled it. This story no long excites me, but it excites you so I shouldn`t just give up. I`m in the process of writing a chapter right now. I`m doing it slowly and only when I feel like it, but I think that it will be done by the end of this week. This chapter will reach 6,000 words, maybe more. I hope that I get my passion back because I haven`t really wanted to write any new stories for the last month or so. Usually I just love something for a while and then get sick of it, but I`m not just going to give up on writing though I really want to. Sorry, for this very long response, but I felt the need to address this.
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You.. you thought about deleting your account? Dude, you're one of the few friends I have here..
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No joke
2973639 That`s one of the reasons I knew I couldn`t just delete it. In my life, I`ve never really loved something for more than a little while. I get all obsessed over something for a few months and then I`m sick of it and I don`t like it anymore. I did that with Monster High, Moshi Monsters etc. I don`t know if I like MLPFIM anymore. I don`t even know if I like writing anymore. I know I can`t just delete this account because I have friends on here, stories that people love to read and I still love reading stories on here. I won`t leave you, but I just don`t know where to go with FimFiction. I hope that I get my spark back and I want to write again. For now, I`m on hiatus in writing. I`ll write when I feel like it, but I don`t know how often that will happen. I`ll still check up on here each day and I`ll try to write.
I want to say I loved the fan fic but one thing...WHY WOULD THEY GIVE FLUTTERSHY EGGS TO EAT!! I'm just a little curious because of how Fluttershy is friendly with animals...
3020939 Oh, thank you for bringing that to my attention! Sometimes I forget that they`re horses! On my first story I had written that Celestia was eating chicken, but luckily I caught it later and fixed it! I took out the eggs. Also, technically she could eat eggs and still be nice because eggs for eating are chicks that never fully formed or died while being created, not to mention that they drink that milk from cows so they can take eggs form chicken and have it be perfectly fine. I still fixed the scene though. I hope that this fixed it for you!
2968254 Don't write because other people are expecting you to. If you've lost your passion for writing, then stop. Don't try and force yourself to keep going, your work will only suffer if you do.
That being said... it would probably be for the best if you did stop writing. Your story is, quite simply, not good. Now, if you want to ignore my advice and keep writing, that's your decision, but if you really have lost the spark that makes you want to write, then it's time to put down the pen and walk away.
3024871 First, I came up with the story and wrote many of the chapters while still having inspiration. Second, thank you for understanding what I said. I did take a break from these stories, but I got inspiration today and submitted three stories, all which got approved, in one day. The spark was constant, but now it comes and goes.
3022160 thanks It just caught my attention so I'd thought I'd let you know... ^_^