I like dis. The dark tag, however, is frightening.

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We're almost done here.

Things will be getting a little hectic from here on out!

Heheh... Looking forward to the future...

The Setup is perfect! I find myself wishing the story to accelerate, but yet i enjoy the suspense, and the threat of the storm to come is both nerve-racking and much anticipated. Yet again you prove the fact that you are a very good writer

I'm scared of what's to come..that dark tag terrifies me.

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just kidding haha, I actually try to avoid clop fics and gore fics but i got here off one of the "if you liked this story then these may interest you:" things and read some of this. It's really good so i'm now tracking my only remaining question is, where da buck did the alicorn come from?!?!?

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Natural phenomenon??? to be honest, you're the first person to ask that question

Also, i will NOT explain where she came from, but i WILL explain why what happens, happens.... and it wont be pretty..... i feel bad for creating her just to do THAT....

227437 I presume that that is because it takes the well educated to notice these things jk I was just curious because well you know there are only two other alicorns in the universe and they kinda happen to be like gods

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Actually, that kind of plays into why what happens to her happens.

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The only thing I didn't really like so far is that you choose to make her an Alicorn. Alicorn usually means royalty, and while there's people that use them anyways, it's hard to just see them as "normal" ponies regardless
Though not bad at all
-Glassed

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Like I told Conventrix, this WILL be resolved in the most humane way that I know possible.....

Again, that depends on your definition of the word "Humane"