who voted this so low, the writing is good and the author is just getting started. Geze, some people talk the talk but don't walk the walk. Give the author time to get a chapter or two more out before rating, 'swat i usual do after tracking a new story, you can't get a story's feel from one chapter this short (no offense to the author)
I know exactly why they voted so low: they saw the sex/gore label and thought I was gonna jump straight into it.... You gotta give time for a story to develop, people!!
exactly, i ain't here for the clop, actually i'll probably end up skipping that, I'm here for a story. If you want quick clop I've been told liquid rainbows has something more along those lines, but if you're here for plot development and storytelling, stick around, this looks like it'll get good.
Well, I... uhh... I've had bad experiences with fics, thats why I'm kind of apprehensive about the sex.... I'll do my best, but you have to know, I'm new to the pony scene, and I'm still learning!
who voted this so low, the writing is good and the author is just getting started. Geze, some people talk the talk but don't walk the walk. Give the author time to get a chapter or two more out before rating, 'swat i usual do after tracking a new story, you can't get a story's feel from one chapter this short (no offense to the author)
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I know exactly why they voted so low: they saw the sex/gore label and thought I was gonna jump straight into it.... You gotta give time for a story to develop, people!!
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exactly, i ain't here for the clop, actually i'll probably end up skipping that, I'm here for a story. If you want quick clop I've been told liquid rainbows has something more along those lines, but if you're here for plot development and storytelling, stick around, this looks like it'll get good.
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Well, I... uhh... I've had bad experiences with fics, thats why I'm kind of apprehensive about the sex....
I'll do my best, but you have to know, I'm new to the pony scene, and I'm still learning!
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Like i said, It ain't gonna bother me. Besides, I'm here for the story not the plot (pun intended)
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Why am I still commenting and not working on chapter 2?!
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probably because i'm a very good distraction. Now git to it,,
Um... if that's alright with you.
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DO IT NOW!!
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Of course!! now stop distracting me and let me do what i (attempt to) do best!
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Got it.