Mommy...?

by DitzyDerperellaDoo

Twins

Author's note, My chapters shall be re-edited by, SlenderPony7. Please check out and follow his stories here, http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Slender+Pony7.

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Ditzy Do slowly opened the door to her older sister's room, who was older than her only a mere two minutes, because they were both twins, although they weren't very identical at all. As Ditzy's eyes adjusted to the darkness of her sister's room, she looked around at all of the dresses and tiaras, bottles of hoof-polish and glitter lying around; her sister was the filliest filly she knew.

Ditzy went over to the side of her sister's bed and pushed her shoulder gently, saying "Daring... Daring... Wake up!"

"Wha..? What is it?"

"Mommy's going to work!"

"Oh... Okie dokie.." Daring groggily responded, and quickly fell back asleep to resume her dreams of prancing ponies, and Ditzy trotted back down the hall to the kitchen, where her mommy was still getting ready for work. Ditzy's eyes took another few moments to adjust to the sudden change in lighting. While they were doing this, Ditzy heard a loud, rapid, insistant knocking on her front door

Author's Note:

Author's note, My chapters shall be re-edited by, SlenderPony7. Please check out and follow his stories here, http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Slender+Pony7.

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Comments

[LaBirdie]

I like it it may be short but the word usage is really nice.