• Published 9th Mar 2013
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Mommy...? - DitzyDerperellaDoo



Ditzy Doo, so learns, what exactualy those red stains on her mommy's coat that she wore to work are.

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The Unicorn and Pegasus

Ditzy looked around again, it was all a blur, the dark grim walls, the mucky floor, and the big machine with the pipes. There was on thing that wasn't blurred, that she could not forget. Those cold, heartless eyes. Those purple eyes, she used to love so much, those eyes that used to make her so happy, but know all she wanted to do was puke when she saw them.
Soon these big muscular pegasus and unicorns came up. They started to make the little foals get in a smaller crowd, they were threanting to hit them with anything they held in there hooves. Unfortunately, Ditzy hadn't noticed them. She had been sucked in the blur so much she hadn't seen them. A tall yellow unicorn and a red pegasus came up to her. The pegasus raised his hoof. He brought it down onto ditzy's face, it had hit her mouth. She coughed up blood and looked up partly dazed. She stood up wobbiling, her face full of fear. The unicorn's horn glowed a bright golden color. Ditzy looked down and relized she wasn't touching the ground. As soon as she had been levitated, she was let go by the magic, and slammed into the mucky floor. She opened her mouth to let out screams of agony, but no sound came out. She quickly shuffled into the now smaller crowd.

Author's Note:

Hey, I know its short, but ya, remember, Her mom's eyes are PURPLE! I tried to make it more discriptive and see if it has less errors..

Comments ( 18 )

2243034 .... scootz wasn't a G1 pony... but it is a pony like rainbow dash, give ya a clue, PURPLE EYES

2241302 you're welcome :)

2245999 mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabyeeeeeeeee

why the dislikes?:raritydespair:

DUDE! you made derpy look bad D:< SHAME BRO,SHAME >:(
:flutterrage:

on chapter 3 now...swear to god dude...IF YOU KILL DITZY D:<

yep,your gonna kill ditzy aren't you....you sick JERK!
:twilightangry2:

2888504 IT IS MY JOB TOO MAKE EVERYPONY LOOK BAD

2893761
plz on next chapter,you can let ditzy die,but will you let her ghost take revenge and destroy the rainbow factory with an army of angels >:D

2896844 if you want to see "death" read my Lighting Dust story. "I wanna be a wonderbolt just like you" :pinkiecrazy:

2897214 i got a feeling,and its a bad one,im writing a story now......im gonna put you in it.....3 letters back by the way HAVE FUN SOLVING THIS :trollestia: nevermind your a sick freak and im just kidding,good day you gore loving sicko :D

3287552 In the rainbow factory,where all you're fears and horrors come true :pinkiecrazy:

oh god I cannot unread this!

oh god I cannot unread this! why did I even continue reading this!

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