These are the times where I hate myself for over-analyzing things. But I have to ask. Why would the spell create a dick and balls, but not include the hair? Can you at least lampshade it? I suspect this will have to come up if any of the others become futas, simply because I can't imagine that every single one of the mane six waxes or shaves.
Anyway, great chapter. Poor Mrs. Cake, although really, she should be inured to most of Pinkie's shenaniganry by now. Although I suppose this is a new low/high for Pinkie. I hope.
what went on is mrs cakes head when she saw this? *nope* begins walking backwards out of the room *nope nope nope nope nope NOPE NOPE NOPE!* closes door *NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE!*
Mrs. Cake? Bit of advice. Back away, turn around, walk away, and file the whole under "things that did not happen". Trust me, it'll be better for your sanity.
It had impressed her; if it were just a few inches longer she would totally be able to give herself a titfuck.
Whawhawhat? Just how racked is she? A boner can't add that much length.
Well, the link to "Oh My" didn't work... but I just used google to see what the video was GOING to be (George Takai, huh? Hmm...), before actually trying to find an alternative.
... I will decide whether to reward or punish you, later, for giving me the initiative to locate THIS VIDEO.
Okay, on to the proofreading:
… “faster. "Cool!” – There are four spaces between the narrative dialogue, and the quote. Why four spaces? … “shoved it's way” – The proper term should be ‘its’, not ‘it’s’. … “so great of I” – ‘of’ should be ‘if’.
As for the chapter, it was just... questionable, but funny as heck. The narrative was sometimes as aloof as Pinkie Pie was, which added a lot to the factor of immersion given how she is the focus of the story. I think it's been a while since I read something this strange, so... might as well relax my 'reviewing muscles' and just enjoy the story for what it is: fun clop.
... I'll still review certain factors, though. Y'ain't gettin' away from me THAT easily.
I don't know about removing ribs, but it's apparently possible enough for somewhere between 1 in every 500 and 1 in every 300 men to do better than Pinkie did. (Source: the "Autofellatio" page on Wikipedia)
...just don't ask me where I learned that term. I honestly can't remember beyond the fact that it was at least half a decade ago, a website, and not somewhere like 4chan.
Holey hell what's going to happen next damn that was actually quite hot.
And then they fucked.
that was awesome
oh poor mrs Cake
Mrs. Cake just had to spoil the fun, but overal, a great chapter.
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These are the times where I hate myself for over-analyzing things. But I have to ask. Why would the spell create a dick and balls, but not include the hair? Can you at least lampshade it? I suspect this will have to come up if any of the others become futas, simply because I can't imagine that every single one of the mane six waxes or shaves.
Anyway, great chapter. Poor Mrs. Cake, although really, she should be inured to most of Pinkie's shenaniganry by now. Although I suppose this is a new low/high for Pinkie. I hope.
2016418 Depends on whether or not they had hair there to start with. Hadn't really thought about whether Pinkie is the shaving type or not...
Who's Pinkie gonna fuck first?
Ha, George Takei!
Uuh... good job
I'll keep reading it to see what is to come. You might be getting a follower depending on if I enjoy where this goes in the future.
Any way, Bravo Zulu
I LOVED IT
And now Mrs. Cake is traumatised
what went on is mrs cakes head when she saw this? *nope* begins walking backwards out of the room *nope nope nope nope nope NOPE NOPE NOPE!* closes door *NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE!*
Mrs. Cake? Bit of advice. Back away, turn around, walk away, and file the whole under "things that did not happen". Trust me, it'll be better for your sanity.
Whawhawhat? Just how racked is she? A boner can't add that much length.
Mrs. Cake: "God. Damn it. Pinkie."
And then she offers to take care of it for her. l:
How the fuck did Pinkie figure out how to give herself head?! I didn't think it was possible!
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Normally it shouldn`t be. Not without removing a few ribs from the bottom of ribcage, that is.
But I would think that Pinkie Pie gets a carte blanc on disregarding physical constraints when it looks like fun thing to do.
2018559>>2019444>>2022817 Pinkie is veeerryyyyy flexible.
Pinkiepie is best trap.
but at the moment was on only one thing, and that thing was in her pants. And had two other things dangling under it.
but at the moment there was on only one thing, and that thing was in her pants. And it had two other things dangling under it.
pinkie cream pie
Well, the link to "Oh My" didn't work... but I just used google to see what the video was GOING to be (George Takai, huh? Hmm...), before actually trying to find an alternative.
... I will decide whether to reward or punish you, later, for giving me the initiative to locate THIS VIDEO.
Okay, on to the proofreading:
… “faster. "Cool!” – There are four spaces between the narrative dialogue, and the quote. Why four spaces?
… “shoved it's way” – The proper term should be ‘its’, not ‘it’s’.
… “so great of I” – ‘of’ should be ‘if’.
As for the chapter, it was just... questionable, but funny as heck. The narrative was sometimes as aloof as Pinkie Pie was, which added a lot to the factor of immersion given how she is the focus of the story. I think it's been a while since I read something this strange, so... might as well relax my 'reviewing muscles' and just enjoy the story for what it is: fun clop.
... I'll still review certain factors, though. Y'ain't gettin' away from me THAT easily.
2259686 no, the video link does work.
Oh my that's hot!
That was, quite literally, as far as I got before I nope'd right out of this thread.
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that video, it's one of the funniest things i've seen in years!
2259686
I love you, and will love you forever, for showing me that video.
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I don't know about removing ribs, but it's apparently possible enough for somewhere between 1 in every 500 and 1 in every 300 men to do better than Pinkie did. (Source: the "Autofellatio" page on Wikipedia)
...just don't ask me where I learned that term. I honestly can't remember beyond the fact that it was at least half a decade ago, a website, and not somewhere like 4chan.
That... was one of the hotest things I've ever read.
Uh oh
Doesn't anyone in this universe know how to lock doors?
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Or knock?