… “disappeared up the the stairs” – ‘the’ only needs to be used, once.
Alright, onto the story. Well, not too much to say, really... Pinkie's still in character, Rainbow Dash just got introduced, and I rather enjoy the way Mrs. Cake and Mr. Cake were used in the chapter, especially with one of them actually saying how this was weird, even by Pinkie's standards. Sometimes, you'd think she didn't have 'standards' to live up to in terms of weirdness, but she always finds a way to up her game, one way or another.
Mrs. Cake's 'comment of assurance' was pretty funny, though.
You need to capitalize the r, but yet another great chapter.
or she is doing it on purpose...
wait you mean that
oh man
*Sets up lawn chair*
Man, why aren't I getting notifications when things I have favorited update?!
In other news, this is getting good.
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Discuss? Is that what they're calling it these days?
Dicks for everyone!
"You are, apparently."
Haha! NIce!
Wonderful!
Dashie, you not a good liar.
2031207>>2034192 Huh. Two commentators with 'fire' in their names, commenting one after the other.
I wish I had a dick
Whate one cotten pikin...
My dick has reterned
I missed you
Eat you heart out pinkie
Well, first things first:
… “disappeared up the the stairs” – ‘the’ only needs to be used, once.
Alright, onto the story. Well, not too much to say, really... Pinkie's still in character, Rainbow Dash just got introduced, and I rather enjoy the way Mrs. Cake and Mr. Cake were used in the chapter, especially with one of them actually saying how this was weird, even by Pinkie's standards. Sometimes, you'd think she didn't have 'standards' to live up to in terms of weirdness, but she always finds a way to up her game, one way or another.
Mrs. Cake's 'comment of assurance' was pretty funny, though.
2035409 And you are the 3rd commenter, who is ON fire. I'm sorry, I had to say something.
"dear, this is Pinkie. best not to question it."
yep!
Do you think she forgets to lock her door?
Lock the door? I think not my good sir.