Chapter Zero
Meet The 13
This is a bonus chapter to help both readers and myself keep track of the 13 OCs in this story. If you would rather learn about them as the story progress, do not read this chapter. I don't think all of them will play a role in the story, but I think this is good background information to know. Here some basic info. Please note that all of them have the ability to shape shift into original disguises as well as existing ponies.
No.1- Brain
Special Talent/Powers - Complete Genius, Enhanced Magical Abilities
Mane: Brown
Cutie Mark - Chess Board
No.2- Ninja
Mane: Black
Special Talent/Powers - Lighting Reflexes, Enhanced Hearing, Enhanced Smell
Cutie Mark- Shuriken
No.3 - Mind Reader
Special Talent/Powers - Mind Reading (Has limitation)
Mane - Green
Cutie Mark - An Open Book
No.4 - Eagle Eye
Special Talents/Powers - Enhanced Eye Sight (Can spot ponies form up to 1.5 miles)
Mane: Orange
Cutie Mark - A Giant Eyeball (How original)
No.5 - Venom
Special Talents/Powers - Poison Fangs, Poison Spikes On Forelegs (Can retract them or shoot them as projectiles)
Mane: Light Green
Cutie Mark - Cobra
No.6 - Princess Cocoon a.k.a. Phantom
Special Talents/Powers - Invisibility, Enhanced Magic, Expert at Hoof to Hoof Combat, Natural Leader
Mane: (Greenish-Blue) Teal
Cutie Mark - Cartoon Ghost
No.7 - Flash - Update: Reckoned to Blitz cause to avoid confusion with Flash Sentry. When I get too reawrting the story, I'll go back an change the name.
Special Talents/Powers - As fast as Applejack on the ground, Is has fast as Rainbow Dash in the air. (It helps to have both of their DNA), Expert Swordsmen.
Mane: ???
Cutie Mark - A Grey Thunder Cloud With Green Lighting (Lighting seems to be a very popular cutie mark on the show.)
No.8 - Cleaver
Special Talents/Powers - Expert At Using Knives, Can Dual Wield, Completely Psychotic, Can Laugh Like Mark Hamill (That's a scary things).
Cutie Mark - Bloody Knife
Mane: Blood Red
No.9 - Blank Canvas
Special Talents/Powers - Nothing that the others can't due already, has yet to discover his special talent, has no extra power or ability that he knows of, Is still a good spy.
Mane: Whight
Cutie Mark - Black Flank
No.10 - Copycat
Special Talents/Powers - Can adapted the talents of any pony he's seen wile disguised, Can not create talents, Can not steal talents form his siblings.
Cutie Mark- Bag of Bits (Represents thievery)
No.11 - Gizmo
Mane: Grey
Special Talent/Powers - Smart And Creative, Gadget Maker, Problem Solver, Less Obnoxious Than Brain, Hoofgun Expert and Creator.
Cutie Mark - Blue Prints
No.12 - Geppetto
Special Talents/Powers - Can Brainwash Ponies With 90% Less Derpy, His puppets are more compident than one the Queen would make, the only indicator of mind control is that ponies will say specific worlds more often, the word varies for each pony.
Mane: Yellow
Cutie Mark - Wooden Puppet On Strings.
And finally, are protagonist bronies and pegasisters!
No.13 - Wasp
Special Talents/Powers - Read to find out. LoL
Mane: Dark Blue
Cutie Mark - A Wasp
So Venom is blank flank?
1936880 Oops. I had his cutie mark in mind last night. I forgot to add it in. It should be there now. It's a Cobra.
How do I already have 5 dislikes? This is only just the set up. This story is just getting stared. I was going to right more Harky next, but now I want to show those haters who's boss. As soon as my cold get's better, I am going to write and edit the shit out of chapter 1.
Not bad I will track for now. Fav later if it somehow keeps my attention.
1942319 Hope I earn it. Rest assure I won't disappoint. Check back around Monday. Depending how bad my cold makes me feel, I should have the the next chapter completed and proof read by than.
Will do. And I really don't think your spelling and grammar were that bad. If they were i would've told you. See I'm a grammar nazi when I want to. I've actually stopped reading storie cuz of grammar... So no pressure.
a Blank Flank...!? Quick, infiltrate the CMC to learn their secrets!
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Really though... the story premise is interesting, but I immediately spot errors even in your posts here. Should be "As soon as my cold gets better". I can't think of a single reason why you would ever put an apostrophe in there. I don't want to sound rude, but if you don't improve your own English, your stories don't stand a chance
Oh God. The nostalgic pain!! I can't believe you referenced Organization 13 in this! At least, that's what I think it references... Well, even if it's not: the nostalgic pain!! Argh!!
Random moustache!
Why didn't you tell us their genders?
Are Geppetto' s victims like the best thralls in Dresden Files: so well and subtly controlled not even they know they've been brainwashed?