No.

Shining armor dismounted, letting a flood of his seamen escape

awwww HELL NO

1922063
HAVE. ALL. OF. MY. UPVOTES!

oh my, why do i get the feeling that people get butthurt over incest. i'm ASSUMING that these three.
1922174
1921939
1921910
read the description, became afraid, and smashed the dislike button for fear of tainting their virgin eyes.

1922063
i suppose i ought to fix that little error, huh?
or maybe i should leave it in....

1922284
ill take them.

1922292

oh my, why do i get the feeling that people get butthurt over incest.

Well, 'lil Twily certainly did.

In relation to horse story, how do you fellate a submarine?
Bite the shaft and suck out the seamen.

1922292 Welcome to the internet? Not sure what you were expecting with this. Sorry, but I do make a point of downvoting depravity. This is just my way of telling people that what they are writing is morally questionable, and that they are either trolling too hard for their own good or need to have a serious inflection on their life.

Have a good day, sir.

1922320
thats complete bullshit. this IS the internet, there are no rules or morals, so you down voting someone else's work just because you don't like the subject matter without even reading it is unfair. if incest is too much for you, fine. fuck off. there is no reason to try to make me " have a serious inflection on their life" because its not going to happen.

1922304
hohoho you so funny.

Hahahahahaha, morals on the internet. How cute.

1922389
i know, right?
what a whiteknight faggot

1922383 You are confused I believe...

Yes, this is the internet. Freedom of speech at its maximum. You will post your story, and there ain't a damn anyone can say about it. I'm still going to give you my opinion of it, and there ain't a damn you can do about it. That's not "unfair." That's life. I don't care if my opinion has a lasting impact on you or not. Just slightly hopeful.

Just because you can, doesn't mean you should. If you consider the internet a place where you can throw morals to the wind, then what does that say about you as a person? If there's one fact about the internet, it's that there's always someone behind every action. Of course, the other unspoken rule is that said person is never a female, but I digress.

It is unfortunate that you have become so upset over so simple a thing. I wish you the best in your future writing...whatever that may be.

1922629 I don't think you get to preach morals and freedom of speech at the same time. If you don't like this genre, move on. I don't find Pinkie Pie funny, so I don't read stories about her. There's a lot of fetish porn I don't enjoy because I don't share the fetish. I don't downvote that sort of thing, though. I find it rather immature to "make a point to thumb down depravity."

Love and tolerate. If you read the story and find it poorly written, downvote. If you disagree with subject matter, move on and leave people who do enjoy the subject matter to their devices. It's not your job to be the moral police of the internet.

Not bad but how many On Hiatus stories do you plan on posting before posting a 2nd chapter to any?

Greetings, author of morally-questionable fanfiction! I'm a freelance editor with no moral obligations to hate stories based solely on subject matter and no preachy white-knight code of misplaced honor to get in the way of my abilities to evaluate and help improve a struggling piece of fiction. Would you be interested in putting my services to use on this or future stories?

1922865
yeah, i think i would...
me and another guy are actually roleplaying to write this particular story, then i just turn it from 4chan greentext to story format

1922838
thats pretty much the point i was trying to make, yea.

1922845
this story came out of the blue... i didn't even intend to roleplay last night, i spent 5 hours in that thread though... and when we finished it was too much material to not save and publish.

and actually... I'm half-way done with another one-shot. after that i suppose ill get back to "Apple Training". most of my work is through inspiration. so when stuff comes to me, it comes to me.

1922873 Fantastic. I've got an editing group under construction right now, with a friend who I used to edit for once upon a time. Once we get everything sorted out, I'll help you. I'll send you a PM once that happens. If you don't hear from me in a day or two, assume I'm a colossal idiot and forgot about you, and violently harass me in a PM of your own.

1922982
well, ok

what the fuck did i just read

1923284
a roleplay that i turned into a story...
about shining armor and little filly twilight having a fun time together

Oh fuck I remember seeing something like this on /mlp/ when I woke up at 2:38 am last night...

TWILEY

Pretty good.

1924042
well thats where this came from...
me and my partner made this story over a 5 hour period.
12-5am. it had 300+ posts and was frontpage all night.

1924231
and yet, still more dislikes than up votes

1924271 Yeah, kind of had a whyboner throughout some of it, then I moved on

1924288
well, i took the greentext story and put it into a more suitable story format.... isnt it great?

1924314 There's... a certain charm to it...?

I get boners from everything, and this was just another day at the mill for me... although a bit too far for my usual tastes but eh, my dick APPARENTLY DOESN'T CARE

1924356
obviously. it never cares

1922292 no dude, I actually love TwixShin fics, heck I like WIncest fics, but I just dont feel Da Magickz on this one, dont know why

1924365 You know, it's not really my thing. Normally I just don't give a vote to stuff like this, but seeing as 1922629 wants to be a dick and thumbs down something just because it's not the type of thing he enjoys, I'll counteract that with a thumbs up. Maybe you could do a Luna clop. There's not enough of those that are well written, or without a lot of S&M

good wincest is hard to find. usually. though I do love a good TwiXSpike fic.

Wow, colaboration rarely works well, but that was well done.

1922320
dude
we're on a website
where we write
fanfiction
about a show
for 6 year old girls
if you want to talk
about depravity
and not come off
as a total hypocrite
why don't you go to
a site or like
"stories in bible land:
jesus is the son of god"
or something
and teach kids about
the magic of moral behavior
otherwise you're just
being an immature
rectal injury victim, yo

and also
everybody on here
wants to fuck ponies
whether they admit it or not

anyway i enjoyed this story
it made me laugh
cruelly and sadistically
at the sexual abuse
of an innocent filly
upvote

1924999
luna? never thought about it.
but why is it mostly bondage?

1925010
incest is the best

1925052
yay 4chan

1925109
yup, we all want that candy vag.

lol It was good Attention all faggots! we are on Fimfiction and on Fimfiction you can wright whatever the fuck you want and if you don't like it STFU! and GTFO!

1925643 hell if I know

1925947
i can see why fluttershy would be into bondage and domination, but idk about luna...
id think she would be more about masturbation

1925989 Personally, I'm more of a romantic. I like clop with feels (both kinds ).

1925996
well my RP partner on this story is the same... he wants the romantic stuff too, with lots of dramatic scenes

1925643 it be a matter of interests. though spilight sorta counts as incest. but I have an absolute addiction to princest with sparkles. or twilunestia.

1926425
you just have a horn fetish

1926465 lots and lots of spurting from both ends. I honestly wonder what magicum would taste like.

1926476
i wouldn't know... but me and my partner are roleplaying as i type this, writing a chapter two for this story... i plan on sucking twilight's horn at some point.

1926489 operation Flutterpeep commense

1926745
yes

Not bad, but for me it's a bit too short as narration: it would totally use a little background, a contestualization, and surely more foreplay. Nonetheless, a good one shot.

1923000 Got the editing group together. Sorta. If you're still interested in having me work with you, check it out. I could use a bit more awesome wincest and fetishy clopfiction on my to-edit list. It's pretty dry at the moment since Cosmonaut basically went on vacation, and this makes me sad.

1927230
well, this is a RP... i just touched it up to make it a story... and me and him are making chapter two of this story right now.

1927380
as i said above, we are making chapter two. so like... what do you want me to do as far as your editing group go?