1939929 (honey I think I raped the kids.) dayum either they must have been drunk or they must have been naturally cruel. however I really think that even though they didn't really have any personality they definitely were a bit ooc for parents I think. especially ones that taught twilight and shining the values they found in the show. just saying.
1939961 me and my partner have basically just said "FUCK CANNON" in this story... we aren't follow shit anymore... and twilight's mom doesn't even have a name in the show.. they have like 3 lines in the whole show, we basically used the parents as antagonists to move on the story and put in some major conflict. of course they are OOC and its hard to believe parents would behave that way, but thats what makes it all the more depraved.
1939995 lol ok I was just adding in my two cents to the melting pot. ok And i'm also glad you went out and told me it doesn't follow cannon so I don't have to scratch my head for reason's all I have to do is enjoy the clop.
1940016 yeah, i mean, beginning of chapter 3 they get on a train to get out of canterlot. SA doesn't go to cadet school, filly twilight is going to another town, and not training under celestia. FUCK CANNON
1940031 like what I did? cept I was probably one of the bigger bastards and left out a shit ton of information to allow reader speculation. this is going to be hilarious. I wonder if they will run into any of their mutual friends from the future.
1945140 Oh no, you and I are perfectly normal compared to the people I speak of. Though I do not fault you or anyone else on what they enjoy, we all have to get through life some how or another
1945173 my partner and i are really moving into a deeply emotionally gripping place with this story, we are transitioning out of just another wincest sex oneshot... with the new narrative, im not even sure HOW we are going to re-introduce sex to the story...
1945208 Yes, from what has currently happened....both of them will be suffering from very deep scars. So sex is not going to be an instant thing oh heavens no...I think a deeper bonding of the emotional level would be called for between the siblings of some form. Not to the point that either of them become dependent on sex...but the act of sex might be the final piece of the puzzle in some way
1945257 yeah maybe... i sent my partner a note about how twilight in REALITY would be really fucked up, she would probably shy away from even comforting touches from shining much.
1945271 Oh yes....the poor child is going to be a total mess.....not only from seeing shining raped, but then she being raped, the verbal abuse and sexual abuse from her father...the fear that if shining touching her was to some how bring all that crashing back onto her...now shining will be able to handle this better if only slightly. Shining will have to walk on egg shells with his sister for a while, slowly bringing her from the shell will have put herself in, to slowly getting her to trust in him once more to even allow him to give her normal love and affection.
That does not even cover what will happen when and if they run into other ponies...how will she react...will she totaly flip or just act like a little statue, but I am just a reader not the writer
phirst.
This is so fucking beautiful.
1939216
well... i just posted chapter two...
1939269 I am pretty sure I commented on second chapter
It was better when it was still cute.
Now you've gone down the path of the dark side, and not in a good way...
No like, no fav, no dislike.
1939308
yeah.... its more than i originally wanted.
1939319 You kinda went overboard here.
I can only hope you are able to redeem yourself.
Good Luck!
1939354
are you going to read chapter 3?
1939291
oh... and you... LIKED it?
I'll leave this in my read later section and wait for more. though I may just drop it entirely.
Clop is good, incest is good, rape is a BIG no-no.
1939366
i don't plan on putting more rape in this...
but my partner and i are stumped as to what to do now...
1939364 But of course, I enjoyed it.
1939397
just a tad creepy...
1939403 Why would it be?
1939418
incestuous rape probably shouldn't be something you enjoy
1939425 I consider incest floalcon rape as one of my tamer fetishes.
WHY!!!!!!!???
1939437
hahaha thats nice...
1939446
"Because you're a filthy whore that has been fucking your brother."
We need a code four Molestia to show twi's parents who's boss. pronto. other than that I can't wait for chapter 3
1939924
im glad people aren't freaking the fuck out (not as bad as i imagined) over the fact they RAPED the kids.
1939929 (honey I think I raped the kids.) dayum either they must have been drunk or they must have been naturally cruel. however I really think that even though they didn't really have any personality they definitely were a bit ooc for parents I think. especially ones that taught twilight and shining the values they found in the show. just saying.
1939961
me and my partner have basically just said "FUCK CANNON" in this story... we aren't follow shit anymore... and twilight's mom doesn't even have a name in the show.. they have like 3 lines in the whole show, we basically used the parents as antagonists to move on the story and put in some major conflict. of course they are OOC and its hard to believe parents would behave that way, but thats what makes it all the more depraved.
1939995 lol ok I was just adding in my two cents to the melting pot. ok And i'm also glad you went out and told me it doesn't follow cannon so I don't have to scratch my head for reason's all I have to do is enjoy the clop.
I sereously did not just say that.
1940016
yeah, i mean, beginning of chapter 3 they get on a train to get out of canterlot.
SA doesn't go to cadet school, filly twilight is going to another town, and not training under celestia. FUCK CANNON
1940031 like what I did? cept I was probably one of the bigger bastards and left out a shit ton of information to allow reader speculation. this is going to be hilarious. I wonder if they will run into any of their mutual friends from the future.
1940049
i was thinking about her going to trottingham instead and sucking milkyway's tits....
idk, its no cannon, who says she meets them at all?
1940063true so we shall see the eventuality.
1940108
i suppose, i think we are going to end up going to ponyville....
Dear god, so much story potency!
Brovo
1940620
story potency, really?
Oh come on, there is room to grow
1942188
im not sure what you are trying to say...
...
...oh
Well, i was talking about potental for plot and...
god damn it.
The story has a lot of potental, okay!?
Will shinging and twilight end up as they do in the show?
Will the princesses come into play?
What kind of growthnwill the characters undergo?
That kind of thing. Honestly
Can't wait to see what happens next.
1942211
hmm... well.... i think we have just said "FUCK CANNON" at this point. so idk about the princesses or anything.
fuck cannon?
idea!
1942233
omg... no.
Oh yes, that is going in a story. Dont know when where or how, but its happening.
might have to thank you in the description
1942280
right....
I think you have created a monster.....a sex driven perverted deviant monster.....I can't wait
1943313
Thats nice
1943395
I now seem like a total weirdo now don't I? Oh well, everyone needs a lil darkness and gloom in their life at one point or another
1943406
Yes, you are a complete freak
1944285
I have been called and called myself worse, I am just happy to know that there are ever stranger weirdo's out there that make me seem 'normal'
1944298
implying I'm the weirdo?
oh come now.
1945140
Oh no, you and I are perfectly normal compared to the people I speak of. Though I do not fault you or anyone else on what they enjoy, we all have to get through life some how or another
1945173
my partner and i are really moving into a deeply emotionally gripping place with this story, we are transitioning out of just another wincest sex oneshot... with the new narrative, im not even sure HOW we are going to re-introduce sex to the story...
1945208
Yes, from what has currently happened....both of them will be suffering from very deep scars. So sex is not going to be an instant thing oh heavens no...I think a deeper bonding of the emotional level would be called for between the siblings of some form. Not to the point that either of them become dependent on sex...but the act of sex might be the final piece of the puzzle in some way
1945257
yeah maybe... i sent my partner a note about how twilight in REALITY would be really fucked up, she would probably shy away from even comforting touches from shining much.
1945271
Oh yes....the poor child is going to be a total mess.....not only from seeing shining raped, but then she being raped, the verbal abuse and sexual abuse from her father...the fear that if shining touching her was to some how bring all that crashing back onto her...now shining will be able to handle this better if only slightly. Shining will have to walk on egg shells with his sister for a while, slowly bringing her from the shell will have put herself in, to slowly getting her to trust in him once more to even allow him to give her normal love and affection.
That does not even cover what will happen when and if they run into other ponies...how will she react...will she totaly flip or just act like a little statue, but I am just a reader not the writer