I fucking hate you you worthless piece of shit

3014156
Oh? Why is that?

not to good but not terrible i still want there to be updates though

3014156

HHHHHEEEEYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i don't give a fuck who you think you are that was uncalled for!!! god damn it what the fucks wrong with you!!

i mean seriously the story might not be the best, but it's defiantly not the worst.

god damn it i hate people like you, you fucking prick!...

3014291

Because you're a giant fucking faggot

3014365
I don't know what I did to you, but if you don't like my story then stop reading.

3014701

I never read your story faggot

3014832

I didn't read it and I never fucking said I did you fucking bitch

3014930
Damn!

3014930

Will- "You're still a faggot, and when I say faggot I mean a derogatory term for homosexual. Also fuck you."

3015122
-First off, for DarknessDragon78,
I would like to say that your work of fiction amuses me and I shall proceed to fallow it. I thank you for allowing this piece of fiction, despite its minor flaws, to exist.
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-Secondly, for Douginthetrench
You, my good sir, have restored my faith in complete strangers who have next to no impact on the life that I lead. I believe I shall move you from 'stranger' to 'acquaintance' in my mental ordering of people I have come across on the internet. You have shown yourself to be a truly proper Fanfiction reviewer and I now must insist you turn your attention towards my own work of fiction and tell me how it could be improved. Or not.
Sincerely,
JBGrim

3015034

you need shot... in the face... with a shotgun... just sayin

Knighty? We have a troll by the name of willrulz11 could you please ban or at least block him?

3024145 Pm or comment doesn't matter my friend. I thank you for honoring my request.

3026571 That is very much appreciated and I welcome you to PM whenever you feel. Ideas are always welcome.
And once more I find myself having a conversation on someone else's story that has nothing to do with the story that houses said conversation.
My apologies.

3024071 3023048 3015034

You three are new here, aren't you?

3026770

You countertrolled. I can respect that.

3026883

Meh. Average internet speech.

3026932>>3026897>>3026617
I don't mind about it bros!
It gives me good advices from others in these comments when talking about others stories, so I can better myself while making my chapters and more stories that come in mind.

3027441 Thank you for understanding, you are wise to use it to better yourself

3029447
No problem

3014291 The guy made a group called "Humanity sucks", and I think that his answer to that.

JUST READ CHAPTER ONE

Well... the prologue. But you get it!

Welp, anyway! I don't know why so many down votes. But I got a few ideas.

Maybe it is because the way Sasuke acted so... UnSasuke like?
Maybe it is because of the grammar errors found inside the story?
Maybe it is because the fight between Sasuke and Naruto was pretty short?
Maybe it is because 'Kami' came to him? Some don't like that short of things. Me? I don't really have a problem with it.
Maybe it is because how fast everything happen? That could be one of the main reasons....

For me though.(I haven't given a dislike) The only part I didn't like, was when his new parents noticed he was an Alicorn. The doctors and everyone else gasped. Shouldn't the doctors saw that FIRST when they... well... took the foal and put him in a bundle? If not, it makes me believes he was born with a bundle covering him. Oh, and they named him 'Naruto'? What the hell, just name him Maelstrom. That fucked up a few points.

P.S. "CTRL + F" then search 'Whatever that Darkness maybe Naruto'. It should be:

"Whatever that darkness may be, it will-"

There is a difference between 'May be' and 'Maybe'. Just helping