Rainbow Dash looked around at the all too perfect world. "What is going on?"
"Oh isn't it wonderful Rainbow Dash?" Rainbow immediatly recognized the soft voice that came from behind.
"Fluttershy!? But you're dead!"
Fluttershy's face went from happy to confused "What are you talking about? I'm right here."
"No. You're not." Rainbow started to back away, still hiding Angel Bunny in her wings. "This, all of this, it isn't real. I know what you've done you soul-eater! And it won't work on me!"
"Rainbow Dash, are you alright?" Rainbow turned around to see Twilight and the rest of the ponies.
"Oh no, don't tell me you've fallen for it to."
"What in tarnation' are you talkin' about Rainbow?" Applejack stepped forward.
"No. It's not real! It's an illusion crated by this evil monster!" She shouted, pointing at Fluttershy.
"Oh please Rainbow Dash. Fluttershy couldn't possibly be an 'evil monster'. She's way too caring and kind." Rarity said.
"The necklaces. Twilight! Get the elements!"
"Why?"
"So I can prove that it's not real!"
"Ok then. But if it is real, you owe me a portion of hay fries."
"Deal."
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"Ok, I got the elements. Lets get this over with." They all put on their respective necklaces and Twilight put on her big crown thingy. They took their formation and initiated the magic of the elements. The big rainbow shot up, cleared the skies, then it came back down and exploded in a magical wave of rainbows, similair to a sonic rainboom. For a brief moment, a destroyed ponyville came into sight. A shadowy version of Fluttershy looked straight at them. Then time froze.
"Well, well, well. Looks like one pony didn't fall for my 'perfect world'. Shame. Well, come on in this world and try and take me down." With that, all the ponies were sucked into the real world.
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Rainbow Dash turned off the T.V. "I am never whatching that again." She got up and went to bed.
The End
A/N
Wasn't expecting that where ya? I might put in some alternate endings later but for now, bring on the funny comments.
Are you shittin' me?
I didn´t expect this kinda ending AT ALL!!! xD
Was a great story, well written and this ending was a perfect ending for comedy style stories. But since this is a dark and sad story, i don´t think it fits that well. But made me chuckle a bit.
Nice work! Keep going!
Jumper
You should have had the police burst in at the end, because this was a cop out ending.
What a !
Honestly didn't see that coming
-Glassed
dam dude funny ending
Okay..Dude Im sorry to say this, great story and all. But that was by far the shittiest ending I have ever seen. I just wasted like 2 minutes of my life reading thsi chapter and I want them back!
167213 yeah i'll give em back in the alternate endings. More funny and, by your definition, 'shitty endings' Then there will be about 1 serious ending. Maybe.
167869 Sorry for sounding harsh, but it feels like people dont even try with endings sometimes.
167925 True, but you gotta admit, it was a little funny. Very unexpected aswell. I do agree with people not trying with endings but truth is, it actually took me a while to think of this ending. I just figured "Hey, lets just make everyone mad!" I was also thinking of having a movie director go "aaaand cut! Thats a wrap." And maybe another going "Rainbow Dash woke up and said 'that was the strangest dream i've ever had in my life.'"
When suddenly, the lord of the underworld grounded evil fluttershy. The end.
172705 OMG THAT IS SO GOING TO BE AN ALT ENDING!!! You are AMAZING!
I was totally expecting a whole, "10 years later, Fluttershy wakes up out of the coma she got from falling, and then goes crazy." Thing.
Well played.
0.o