I'm sorry, but that rape scene just about killed me..... I kept expecting one of the mane six to break down the door with Tank in tow and save her, and ugh.... Sorry, that just really screwed up my head.
1580898 Thank you so much ^.^ And I fixed it: you were right, it should have been 'dried' =P
1580345 I'm so sorry :( That scene about killed me to write also. The Tank part was something that came to me halfway through Gilda's arrival and I'm thinking 'Wait wouldn't the turtle be around?' I had to do something with him =(
1609492 Ahh, well thank you :) I've always hated rape where the victim was depicted as having a good time or was scarcely described all so I chose the more emotional route. I also had a lot of help from some VERY moving songs.
Nope. Sorry but I absolutely hate rape scenes, and I dont like reading a fic that contains rape with no warnings anywhere that rape will be involved. This is not a comment on your writing ability, and I may have been willing to read this and continue on if you had put some warning even at the top of the chapter (though I understand not wanting to give out spoilers.)
This had been a pleasant story but this scene, with no prior warning for those of us who do not with to read about rape, is a deal breaker for me and I will not be reading the rest of this fic. So sorry but no thumb (neither up or down) and no fav.
However I do wish you good luck in your future endeavors!
THAT WAS HORRIBLE god I thought this was a great fanfic up to hear and not even one warning ill read the next chapter hopping twi and flutter can fix this sh*t
I thought it was very in-character for a slighted Gilda that apparently had a rather severe infatuation with Dash to come back years after being cast out by her and rape her in revenge.
Homosexuals do it all the time, have you seen the "romance"-related crime rates with-in their community? It's neurotic, and far above the average rate per couple per person. And, they don't even report most of them, so their infrequently reported crime is far above average. I walk with caution around homosexuals, they snap into degenerate violence, you can call that a judgement, you can call that being concerned for my own safety. Whichever... Of course, I walk with caution around people in general, we're a violent species, but some people have more reasons to snap than others.
So, as I said, I find it very believable that in this AU-setting, that Gilda would rape Rainbow, I just find it unusual that it took so long for her to do it.
I can understand people being turned away by the seemingly abrupt scene and being angry about having no warning, but I can't say I have that problem. I read novels and fanfics about equally and the thing about novels is, they don't have trigger warnings.
I've read this story once all the way through and this is my second go-round and if I remember correctly I like how it went to the current endpoint. This is probably the story I want to see updated the most. Edit: just finished the for the second time and I really just hope that this doesn't end up being just straight--up abandoned. As I said before, this is currently the story I want to see updated out of the many that are on my lists.
NOOOO! TANK!
I'm sorry, but that rape scene just about killed me..... I kept expecting one of the mane six to break down the door with Tank in tow and save her, and ugh.... Sorry, that just really screwed up my head.
1580898
Thank you so much ^.^ And I fixed it: you were right, it should have been 'dried' =P
1580345
I'm so sorry :( That scene about killed me to write also. The Tank part was something that came to me halfway through Gilda's arrival and I'm thinking 'Wait wouldn't the turtle be around?' I had to do something with him =(
Would be glad to see if Gilda and Iron Claw would be brutally murdered or atleast beaten from the rest of main six.
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Thank you for saying it was well-written =) I'm not sure how to take the calmly part...so I'll assume thats a good thing?
1609492
Ahh, well thank you :) I've always hated rape where the victim was depicted as having a good time or was scarcely described all so I chose the more emotional route. I also had a lot of help from some VERY moving songs.
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Can't say that I have
A couple things
First
It's "too" not "to", also there needs to be a comma before "since"
second, the whole chapter is italicized and centered
Nope. Sorry but I absolutely hate rape scenes, and I dont like reading a fic that contains rape with no warnings anywhere that rape will be involved. This is not a comment on your writing ability, and I may have been willing to read this and continue on if you had put some warning even at the top of the chapter (though I understand not wanting to give out spoilers.)
This had been a pleasant story but this scene, with no prior warning for those of us who do not with to read about rape, is a deal breaker for me and I will not be reading the rest of this fic. So sorry but no thumb (neither up or down) and no fav.
However I do wish you good luck in your future endeavors!
THAT WAS HORRIBLE god I thought this was a great fanfic up to hear and not even one warning ill read the next chapter hopping twi and flutter can fix this sh*t
I just love authors who go from Gilda=jerk to Gilda=monster.
The rape was bad and out of place. Not only that, but having Gilda be behind it just made it worse.
I'm just reading this story, being all happy Then I saw this
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I thought it was very in-character for a slighted Gilda that apparently had a rather severe infatuation with Dash to come back years after being cast out by her and rape her in revenge.
Homosexuals do it all the time, have you seen the "romance"-related crime rates with-in their community? It's neurotic, and far above the average rate per couple per person. And, they don't even report most of them, so their infrequently reported crime is far above average. I walk with caution around homosexuals, they snap into degenerate violence, you can call that a judgement, you can call that being concerned for my own safety. Whichever... Of course, I walk with caution around people in general, we're a violent species, but some people have more reasons to snap than others.
So, as I said, I find it very believable that in this AU-setting, that Gilda would rape Rainbow, I just find it unusual that it took so long for her to do it.
I can understand people being turned away by the seemingly abrupt scene and being angry about having no warning, but I can't say I have that problem. I read novels and fanfics about equally and the thing about novels is, they don't have trigger warnings.
I've read this story once all the way through and this is my second go-round and if I remember correctly I like how it went to the current endpoint. This is probably the story I want to see updated the most.
Edit: just finished the for the second time and I really just hope that this doesn't end up being just straight--up abandoned. As I said before, this is currently the story I want to see updated out of the many that are on my lists.