1778101 Abruptly shoved in is the best way I could think to handle Dune Sea. My alternative idea was to go so far with the mane plot then cut over to several chapters of her doing her thing, but I felt that that might discourage some of the reader base and make me lose readers in the long run. Best just to sprinkle her in at the end of most every chapter so that people can skip them at their leisure and read over them if and when the decide to figure out the upcoming plot. Save your 'yay' for chapter 14
Shame we didn't get to see Gilda and Iron Claw getting trounced by Big Mac, Applejack, and of all ponies, Rarity! I would've paid money to see Gilda getting her beak smashed by Rarity of all ponies!
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Abruptly shoved in is the best way I could think to handle Dune Sea. My alternative idea was to go so far with the mane plot then cut over to several chapters of her doing her thing, but I felt that that might discourage some of the reader base and make me lose readers in the long run. Best just to sprinkle her in at the end of most every chapter so that people can skip them at their leisure and read over them if and when the decide to figure out the upcoming plot.
Save your 'yay' for chapter 14
Shame we didn't get to see Gilda and Iron Claw getting trounced by Big Mac, Applejack, and of all ponies, Rarity! I would've paid money to see Gilda getting her beak smashed by Rarity of all ponies!
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It isn't really that surprising...
Sweet, sweet revenge. Really glad you left all of that up to the imagination. Much more powerful/satisfying.
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I'm surprised they managed to get away with lying.
Sure, of course they survived, of course there was something left for Shining Armor to cart off to jail.
How would you even subdue a Griffon safely?
I'm honestly just skipping the Dune Sea parts because I really don't give a fuck about them.