This is starting to seem like a pretty awesome fiction so far, good job!

This was a sweet chapter ~.~
You're moving between what is cannon and what is your own creation smoothly. I like it. Onward!

~Have a good one.

I really like the idea that Applejack's hat came from Rarity. I'd never seen that before (usually it's her mom or dad) and it's an interesting idea.

Applejack's accent is a bit thick though. Not a deal breaker just a bit distracting.

But so far I'm glad this popped up in my notifications for the Twijack group.

Even Smarty Pants would have been a grand gesture of comfort, but he was busy doing a book report she had assigned to him.

That line was absolutely adorable.

Does this have Appledash in it? I'm to lazy to find out, but don't worry I'm still reading the story though.

This...

3413285 I think it has Mane six x Mane six. Ya get me?

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it no exist :l