Nice update! Had to re-read half the story again to catch up with events, but that only re-affirmed how great it can be at times.
I see the story is getting even more dramatic, I'm guessing it'll all come to a head when Dune Sea invades and all the characters need to put aside the drama in order to save Equestria.
Oh, and please give more context for Applejack and Rainbow Dash's relationship? I'd love to see the same dedication and care taken in fleshing that out as Twilight and Fluttershy, which I think the story also needs to get back to.
I think it would be great to have more of a focus by dedicating each chapter to individual sets of characters and their emotions while interacting with the others. This story is at its best when the characters are questioning themselves and all they've ever known in the face of these new romantic emotions that have welled up for their friends.
No problem. It's just like how people think that some of the newer FiM episodes are pandering to fans because they are too much like fanfics. It just so happens that both writers came to the same conclusion after scrutinizing the characters and deciding on how they would react to a situation, or where there character logically needed to go next.
All that happened was that we both came to the same conclusions about where the characters should go and what the next stage of the story should be, because that seems logical based on the information we're given from the show in the context of the story.
Nice update! Had to re-read half the story again to catch up with events, but that only re-affirmed how great it can be at times.
I see the story is getting even more dramatic, I'm guessing it'll all come to a head when Dune Sea invades and all the characters need to put aside the drama in order to save Equestria.
Oh, and please give more context for Applejack and Rainbow Dash's relationship? I'd love to see the same dedication and care taken in fleshing that out as Twilight and Fluttershy, which I think the story also needs to get back to.
I think it would be great to have more of a focus by dedicating each chapter to individual sets of characters and their emotions while interacting with the others. This story is at its best when the characters are questioning themselves and all they've ever known in the face of these new romantic emotions that have welled up for their friends.
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Lol, now when I get chapter 15 done it'll seem like I'm pandering to you xD
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No problem. It's just like how people think that some of the newer FiM episodes are pandering to fans because they are too much like fanfics. It just so happens that both writers came to the same conclusion after scrutinizing the characters and deciding on how they would react to a situation, or where there character logically needed to go next.
All that happened was that we both came to the same conclusions about where the characters should go and what the next stage of the story should be, because that seems logical based on the information we're given from the show in the context of the story.