Ah yes, as editor I approve of this story!

Great work with what you put together mate. From what I saw earlier, and what I'm reading now, you improved this a lot!

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1836028 There's more...?

i wish i had more time to help proof read, but its still awesome, great work.

I was intrigued.
So little Diamond Dog clop out there.
I was intrigued.
"make a pet out of each one of them"
I was intrigued.
Now I am leaving.

Damn... The frackin grammer in this made me grimace but damn that was good ... Bout time somebody wrote diamond dog clop that didn't involve rape.

1835711 It doesn't bode well when the editor can't write one short sentence without randomly capitalizing words.

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My Ipod does not like me
Really it just wants to put in capitals everywhere.

Heh, basically what i'm trying to say is that when I type a comment quickly I tend to make capital mistakes.
But because I have a feeling you won't be satisfied with this, so I've changed the comment accordingly.
Now we can all live in peace

Well after reading this I have one thing to ask....and that is will you continue? Lol.

Absolutely incredible!
There are numerous spelling and grammar errors but... this is really good.

The pacing is excellent. The psychological aspects of it are very well done.

Just fix up the spelling and grammar and it would be the best!
Sorry, I can't point out the errors at this current moment in time so... Yeah!

Sorry, but I just can't read this. The grammar is terrible. I realize you're an ESL, so I'm not going to insult you or anything, but I just can't read something with grammar that bad.

I love it

1836028 ... yes?

ugh im dying to see him write some more stuff please come back and update soon!

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2400506 good to know

to you my friend i give you a sacred symbol of my order
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if you a bro you kno

enjoy

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2409166 XD

...quite a few grammatical errors... ...not sure if it's because he's a diamond dog, or if a proof-reader's needed...

update soon?

Diamond Dog and sex. You sir, have all my love and respect, as you probably can guess.

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Ahem.

"Iron Will makes a Porno" chapter one.
"Clop, Clop" chapter "In the Hall of the Diamond Dogs"

And for one I didn't write, "Carnality"

Are you ever going to update this? T-T

2619157 3rd chapter is almost ready

2619903 HURRA!!!!!!

Lets celebrate with these

“Bah, what does a dog know about loyalty?

Well apparently Rainbow dash knows nothing about ponies best friend, or honor of the pack.

I liked it, but the gramatical errors kept me from reading more than half of it