IT LIVES!

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They all still in danger.

Still good. For someone who is nit a native english speaker this is great. The text is a bit cobbled and awkward at points but its better than a lot of things I have read. Keep it up.

Did you find a proofreader? I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner but I have limited chances to do so.

Always good to see another fan of Black Dog. And nice cliffhanger.

Well... What will happen next.

And how he going to get out of this one.

4303108 :) thx.

4304412 rule of clop tell us that if something can be bucked, then it'll be bucked. But right now I would like to finish another story about Maud, and next chapter of harmony side effects

4339047 Hmm okay that could be interesting

There hasn't been a comment in 13 weeks. Just saying hi.

4814093 chapter 4 is proofreaded at least, which means chapter 5 is on the works.

After learning what Blacky looks like and some brain storming, he reminds me of a specie from a game. I'll tell you of next chapter.

Just here hoping we get a new chapter soon. And the threesome that should happen in it.

Hello?