PassionBerry discovers her special talent after 17 years of waiting, is she pleased with the outcome
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Haha thankyou, i thought i had fixed that My bad
No offence, but you made numerous (and quite frankly repeated) errors in punctuation and grammar. The chapter was great and I loved it, but the errors somehow killed my erection. If you would like, I can make all the corrections for you immediately.
sure thing would love any help i can get
I'm so sorry, i havent had time to proof read, but i will do the next chapter, I've just been busy
Damn, so she's in constant heat? That sucks. Breaking hearts on accident, tearing apart families, having ponies always look at you funny.
About the same as the milkmare, Milky Way.
i.imgur.com/fV4Hg.png
Oh god, she remind me of my frd that get all the ladies
Updated! Commence the reading!
everyone wants a piece of the berryits been proven by SCIENCE fool!!
1779341
Haha thankyou, i thought i had fixed that
My bad
No offence, but you made numerous (and quite frankly repeated) errors in punctuation and grammar. The chapter was great and I loved it, but the errors somehow killed my erection. If you would like, I can make all the corrections for you immediately.
sure thing would love any help i can get
I'm so sorry, i havent had time to proof read, but i will do the next chapter, I've just been busy
Damn, so she's in constant heat? That sucks. Breaking hearts on accident, tearing apart families, having ponies always look at you funny.
About the same as the milkmare, Milky Way.
i.imgur.com/fV4Hg.png
Oh god, she remind me of my frd that get all the ladies
Updated! Commence the reading!
everyone wants a piece of the berry
its been proven by SCIENCE fool!!