PassionBerry discovers her special talent after 17 years of waiting, is she pleased with the outcome
Great, first comment happens to be me asking if I could proof-read for you, PM me when you have made your decision, take as much time as y'all need
Well. The clop seems a bit forced (not to mention creepy).
Anyway, lots of grammar and formatting issues. Might want to get an editor.
I LOVE IT
LUV DIS
Its the scent, and mane.
Why is everybody bound by their name? (Hey, it kinda sounds a song)
This is... interesting. I can't wait to see how this goes!
Looks really good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I like it more please
1409198Haha yeah it is kind of supposed be a tad abrupt
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Tracking. Do not betray my expectations...........
You have my attention.
Awsome
Great, first comment happens to be me asking if I could proof-read for you, PM me when you have made your decision, take as much time as y'all need
Well. The clop seems a bit forced (not to mention creepy).
Anyway, lots of grammar and formatting issues. Might want to get an editor.
I LOVE IT
LUV DIS
Its the scent, and mane.
Why is everybody bound by their name? (Hey, it kinda sounds a song)
This is... interesting. I can't wait to see how this goes!
Looks really good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I like it more please
1409198
Haha yeah it is kind of supposed be a tad abrupt
HHHHHHHHHHHHMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
Tracking. Do not betray my expectations...........
You have my attention.
Awsome