Paul the human thinks stallions and mares should be equals! What a weirdo. Cute butt, though. Which of Ponyville's lovely ladies will be the one to tame his fiery personality?
Well, it's very strange that I leave a single comment on any story. But since I'm following this one punctually, I think I'll give myself the freedom to leave my humble opinion, especially since I usually let the chapters accumulate, I'm definitely hooked.
The chapter started very well, I have the feeling that the further the story progresses it gets better and better, the theme of rebellion really moved me a lot and I laughed a lot in this chapter.
However, I have to say that I was a little disappointed that it didn't go further, I think more could have been made of the matter. But that is only my point of view.
I also felt a little sorry for Paul for having failed in such a way. However, I am glad that in the end all this was not in vain and that I got something out of it.
When I read about the sign it gave me some hope of seeing him demonstrating what he learned in the royal guard, beyond pleasing mares. I mean, I assume that at least he had a minimum of training in combat and defense and that he could very well hold off a few ponies (I still haven't given up hope).
In general I think it was a good chapter as usual, however at least in my case I feel that the first half of the chapter raised my expectations too much and the ending did not fully satisfy them.
It is a bit more difficult for me to rate this chapter, for me it is between three and four so I will give it... four stars! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Despite everything, it was a very entertaining and hilarious episode that kept me glued to the screen the entire time.
11810305 The description of the Fic on the front page makes you think otherwise. Guess I can skip then since this is a bit much for me even comedically.
lol
Well, it's very strange that I leave a single comment on any story. But since I'm following this one punctually, I think I'll give myself the freedom to leave my humble opinion, especially since I usually let the chapters accumulate, I'm definitely hooked.
The chapter started very well, I have the feeling that the further the story progresses it gets better and better, the theme of rebellion really moved me a lot and I laughed a lot in this chapter.
However, I have to say that I was a little disappointed that it didn't go further, I think more could have been made of the matter. But that is only my point of view.
I also felt a little sorry for Paul for having failed in such a way. However, I am glad that in the end all this was not in vain and that I got something out of it.
When I read about the sign it gave me some hope of seeing him demonstrating what he learned in the royal guard, beyond pleasing mares. I mean, I assume that at least he had a minimum of training in combat and defense and that he could very well hold off a few ponies (I still haven't given up hope).
In general I think it was a good chapter as usual, however at least in my case I feel that the first half of the chapter raised my expectations too much and the ending did not fully satisfy them.
It is a bit more difficult for me to rate this chapter, for me it is between three and four so I will give it... four stars! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Despite everything, it was a very entertaining and hilarious episode that kept me glued to the screen the entire time.
Keep up the good work!
well, at least he got something out of it
What in the realms am I reading? Please tell me this has a point to it or should I stop wasting time on it?
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I would say that the point is to take it with humor, I don't think this is a fanfic to be taken seriously
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The description of the Fic on the front page makes you think otherwise. Guess I can skip then since this is a bit much for me even comedically.
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Well, I don't know what ideas the description of the fanfic gave you, but at least it seems to me that it warns very well in advance.
Anyway, if you don't like it you should definitely discard it, or you'll really be wasting your time
Interesting and unexpected but enjoyable.
Equestrian mares about Anon being serious:
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