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Heh.
I wasn't thinking about TES when I wrote this. Just an appropriate title.

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>When you finish the story
Oh, man. I have so much to tell in this story. The journey is definitely not going to be short.

>One you are done the story, will you go back and edit it to smooth out the grammar?
Yeah. I'm a little broke right now. As soon as I get my work sorted out, I'll hire someone to fix the grammar.

Thanks!

This journey interests me. I wonder what this world has in store for Alexei.
i.chzbgr.com/full/6154482944/h9DD4A906/adventure-chipmunk

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>I wonder what this world has in store for Alexei.

He didn't hesitate when he rushed towards this mysterious pair.

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had to stop reading and gif it

This fic is really interesting, looking foward to future chapters.

This fic is really interesting, u got my follow :D

Thanks again S-W for another awesome chapter. I'm excited to finally see a new well written HIE fanfic on this site. Thus far, the dialog between characters is well done and the world building is slowly getting more interesting, especially with little foreshadowing scenes like with the Discord/Celestia conversation in the previous chapter. That conversation really left me wondering if Celestia will be the antagonist in this story or merely mistrustful of Alexie due to his origin/circumstances in the future when/if they meet. Your action description of the fight with the Hyena was well done and quite entertaining. I wish you the best of luck writing your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.

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They're bound to meet.

Thanks!

Looks like ya made it onto the front page
https://ibb.co/Pr28HjN

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Yeah. For a while, I even held the top spot.

People love the story!

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One thing I agree on, the nameless name (namely Anon), is too annoying. I certainly realize that it's a simple name

Regardless of how you imagine him - green faceless person or generic anime dude - Anon is openly cartoonish character. This fact makes him a much easier fit for MLP world rather than Johns and Janes.

You can make other human characters work, but it's more difficult and, in case of short funny stories, unnecessary.

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Шикарно!

I can respect the guys goal, as long as he pursue this intelligently, and not sacrificing others life for it.

the zebra knew English

Мда.

Тут есть два варианта: либо мы сразу хотим приключений в волшебном мире и по воле творца стираем языковой барьер (его просто нет и никогда не было, и даже не упоминается, что он мог бы быть), либо персонажи учат языки (возможно, за кадром, чтобы не отнимать у истории время).

Откуда в Тридевятом Царстве, в некотором государстве волшебных лошадок Английский и Немецкий? Это параллельный мир, где тоже во все континенты воткнули по Юнион Джеку? Наш герой - не первооткрыватель, и по этим зебрам уже стрелял танк из "Железного Капута"?
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Показать на себя и произнести своё имя - это то, для чего не нужен никакой "name".

I have to heavily disagree about the eternal life/immortality view here. There is no greater curse really. Watching everyone you know and love grow old and die while you remain unchanging. And even if that doesn't matter to you, once you've seen and done everything, what then? Not like you can die, you're immortal, i.e. cannot die. Not to mention the human mind cannot physically handle more than a little over 100 years worth of memories.

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>When you've seen and done it all, what then?

You have a whole infinite universe at your disposal. And, apparently, other universes.

>Not like you can die, you're immortal, i.e. cannot die.

You can block out your memories and live your life over again just for fun. Or block them with a certain condition that's almost impossible to fulfill. You'd basically be dead. Or rather in a deep sleep.

>Not to mention the human mind cannot physically handle more than a little over 100 years worth of memories.

There's no research on the subject. Not to mention the fact that our brains "blank out" a lot of unnecessary memories.

Can you remember what you had for breakfast a week ago? What pattern was the plate?

If you start recalling memories from your childhood, 90% of the details will be made up by your brain.

Love how he started out with the Zebra insof being dropped right into Ponyville.

Real Reverend Insanity type stuff going on here. Cant wait to see where this goes