The last thing I expected to see on Fimfiction was our Russian fanfiction, which I just started reading on a ficbook yesterday. The only thing I can wish the author is good luck in promoting Russian literature abroad and like it automatically

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Don't expose me so quickly! We are here on a mission

“Your faith is strong, Mother will be pleased with you,” Midnight said with a warm smile and demonstrated an orb glowing with a pale blue light. “Our Lady, possessing infinite wisdom, foresaw such an outcome and left some preparations - an artifact containing part of Her great power.” "With its help we will break the vicious chains of harmony and destroy its conspiracy against our Mother!”

Some parts are glued like this author

Good translation! If I knew how to read Russian, I would’ve looked at the original. One you are done the story, will you go back and edit it to smooth out the grammar? (It’s already good, but going from one language to another can leave things feeling a bit weird)

All in all, great first chapter!

“Night mother” huh?

Either someone is an ES fan or im too much of one.

Huh, so far I'm liking where this is going. From being translated, it actually reads pretty easily for a native English speaker. But damn that's one brutal way to start a fic.

Consider my interest piqued!

At least bring your headphones and phone so you can listen to music!