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Another epic chapter
And in the upcoming invasion, Alex will have the chance to get his hands on alicorn and/or changeling queen components.
Speaking of which I wonder if Twilight will have the same idea💡 or at least the temptation 😈.
I'm still confused. How did he escape the guard's tracking capabilities?
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She needs at least some kind of trace, and how can she find it in the flowing water?
The abilities of marks are not omnipotent. Otherwise, ponies, zebras, and thestrals would have taken over the world by now.
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Right, so why didn't she assume he went down river if nothing else? Did she expect a 1-armed and 1-leged man to swim upstream? Or, is that the point? That she thought a 1-armed/legged man couldn't possibly win against a giant sewer toad?
If it's the latter, I can technically buy that. She wouldn't be as familiar with our protagonist as the reader is. Rather, it is the reader who is purview to most of his secrets. Heck, even Chrysalis thinks that the human and the dark mage are separate entities.
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That's why she flew further downstream, searching for traces. For example, maybe he grabbed the edge of the platform or there was blood/body parts somewhere.
You're also overlooking branching and side streams. Somewhere the current is fast, somewhere it's slow. Ponies aren't evenly dispersed, are they? A human could well have gone sideways at some point, against a slower current. He could even reach the other main stream, although then he would have to get out of the water and leave tracks. Each fork adds options and each option must be checked. It all grows exponentially.
Nope. Did she draw any conclusions? They were in the sewer for hour tops. There's no way to draw conclusions in that short a time.
Luna asked her opinion - Star said she thought the man was eaten.
That's why she wanted to keep searching the sewers.
Luna also deemed it unnecessary as she had another option almost ready.
She uses spells ten times an hour and even minor household issues are solved with magic. It's no surprise that she subconsciously relies on magic more.
What?
They've already tracked down and killed that dark mage. He had nothing to do with a human whatsoever. Nowhere did it say that the human was capturing other changelings either.
What makes you think a human and a dark mage are somehow related?
Chrysalis was just remembering the recent casualties among the changelings.
Ugh, that's a big chunk of text
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Ah, fair. Yeah, my knowledge of sewers all but begins and ends with the TMNT appearing in their home base or else getting out from under a sewer manhole cover. I hadn't considered much beyond that. I was thinking almost entirely straight shots with long gentle slopes, but that's what you do with a single house hold, not the multiple channels for a city-wide, industrial affair.
Heh, you know, it was an admitted leap, but for some reason I had convinced myself that that was a plant that Alexei had left to make it seem like some pony was doing such things. But I simply hadn't been reading with a clear enough head.
And thank you for the explanation. This is a delightfully villainous story.
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I'll tell you a little secret: I was very much inspired by the Vivec sewers (Morrowind) when I was thinking about Canterlot.
Man, I love this history, but I'm with the mc, he need to be more powerful, become the strongest monster that is know, a human with a objective and nothing to loose, that kind of man is the most dangerous, and I would love to see how he become the final boss, but one that win actually, he "deserve" win, kinda, anyway, have a great day and stay safe.
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You know what they say: a lot of bad luck leads to good luck. Maybe something good will happen soon? Who knows?
Thank you!
Him: hold my beer watch ima cheat death again.... again.