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Repeated paragraph.
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Oops, my bad
Thanks.
With the current formatting style it's often hard to understand which character is saying what. If you have paragraph breaks between sentences spoken by the same character, it looks as if another character is saying them. It's still easy enough to understand monologues, but dialogues have become very messy.
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It's always been like this...
Then what should I do? Remove paragraph breaks or just put everything in single quotes?
I think I'll look into the formatting rules tomorrow.
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Maybe if you remove paragraph breaks when whatever is being said is still being said by the same character, it would make reading a lot easier. If they're still talking, keep it within the same paragraph, that should help clarify a lot.
This chapter is nuts
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First paragraph and dudes already braining a changeling, absolute menace. Good to have ya back buddy.
Damn seems Alexis last chapter was on the upswing but this chapter everything crumbled and he's now back to step one, just can't wait to see how he uses his stubbornness to etch his way out next chapter, lost 2 limbs thou.
Alex may be the villain protagonist of the history, yet I can't help but wish he finds a way to take Celestia down a peg.
Is not just her "absolute power" arrogance; the truth is Tia doesn't hate Alex because of his many crimes, but simply because he dared to slight her aka the Almighty Unconquered Sun. Her bruised ego demands retribution.
Delightfully, and unapologetically evil, but, best of all, so far, written like an actual genius is behind it.
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I don't really want people to think Celestia is a villain, so I'll add a few coins:
She really doesn't care much about the crimes he's committed. (Reminder: she's a few thousand years old, not much can touch her at all).
But she does care about the possible consequences of his actions (what if a ritual like this gets out in the open? there will be many who want to repeat it. so you have to suppress such things).
The only thing she's worried about is her sister. Ponies come and go. Equestria may crumble into ashes one day too, but Luna will be with her forever. And then there's the man who was going to be used as a pill for Luna, but ended up using them himself.
There's some frustration.
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Dunno, I think having a ruler with so much power and so utterly detached and jaded of everything can be scarier than a villain like Alex.
The greatest enemy of Friendship is not Hatred, but Apathy.