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Nice stuff but, these long narration paragraphs need some punctuation, or something, to make them a bit easier to read and understand without straining over each sentence.
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Well, now it's confirmed that Luna and Twilight have escaped, and Celestia was captured, now all that's left is Cadance. We'll probably find out by the next few chapters about her.
At first, I thought this figure was a Samurai Warrior, until I read it further. Btw Valiant, will there be similar factions like that/those from the original? I.e. The Changeling Samurai, the Dragon Legions, Knights of the Golden sun.(For the knights, perhaps Bulwark and his men are the versions of them here in this revamp, but they also seem to be the version of the Everfree Forest hidden villagers/resistance)
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thanks for that, I corrected what I could.
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Hey Val, can you give me a description of Dainn and his two lieutenants?
11691031
You accidentally misspelled Dainn, with the i before the a
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One 'N' or two?
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The only spelling error is that the i is before the a.
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Okay then.
Nice work here and man Bulwark is hardcore here and I already love him and hope he and his men get something to heal their burns or at least lessen them and be more comfortable since they likely are still feeling some sense of pain from them
Loved the song at the end a very nice touch and I hope we get an image of what Bulwark’s armor and weapons look like in general. And i have a feeling he’s gonna he Luna’s pairing here in this story
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And that they gonna save Fluttershy, Pinkie and AJ. Also, Twilight, Rarity and Dashie didn't get caught by those bullies. If you see a caribou, shoot them down with no mercy.
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Unless they are the Warborn and their allies
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Okay, kill the Stonehooves caribou on sight.
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I read most of the conversation and this is why I created the Warborn. Just because one batch of a certain race is bad it doesn't mean they are ALL bad. Even in the real world that has been the biggest misconception in human history. Judging an entire people by the actions of a few.
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Exactly and hang their antlers as trophies and wall decorations
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True that and yes while some do deserve death some don’t or at least need to be shown how wrong things are and need to change
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That’s just ridiculous. A pony dating a caribou after everything they did to enslaved them? I don’t approve of it. It’s an abomination and I don’t want Fluttershy dating that mute Caribou.
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How did they bound?
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I never mentioned that
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Well you were thinking it.
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umm Bulwark is a pony. Earth Pony Stallion to be exact
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Not really no
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Okay, you win this round. But I still don’t want the ponies dating caribou because they’re jerks.
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not mine.
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That’s meant for Wolf.
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Only the Stonehooves are, mostly; and their allies. Let’s not forget, in the original two stories, there were many ponies who got into relationships with Caribou. Including AJ and Dash…
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Did they put black collars on them?
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I’d say, yeah, that’s what the slavers all did. You should Probably should check the original and read them to check. FYI: Non Stonehooves don’t use collars at all
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I don't know; with rope, with magic...?
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Well you should ask the one who created the story in the first place.
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Well, yeah but I was just responding to Skywalker's comment that usually the wings aren't bound before plucking in FoE
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Yes, and the caribou don’t like it when their antlers cut off.
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Obviously, but on a side note, I'm pretty sure that female caribou don't have antlers. #sexualdimorphism
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Like it better if the does have antlers.
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actually they do. shorter than the males but just as elaborate.
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Oh, I thought due to: sexual dimorphism, animal documentaries, and FoE artwork I’ve seen, that the female Caribou here should lack horns, or at least they’d be very short and not elaborate like the males
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no the males trim them down to degrade and humiliate them in the fics
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I just thought that they didn’t have to, since they were already smaller in body size and supposedly already lacked horns, which is why they had these views of male superiority in the first place.
When they dealt with unicorns and alicorns, they developed the practice of severing the horns entirely. Since they were not used to the fact that females could have horns or antlers and could use magic. On that note, the female antlers could’ve used magic like the males’ ; if Caribou sexual dimorphism didn’t mean that the females lacked horns then they would have severed them instead of just trimming them if they could use magic. If they trimmed them in the beginning, would’ve done the same with the mares.
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In the original, we’d never seen specific mentions of doe antlers; or even the species antlers’ capability of using magic; the female Warborn didn’t seem to be that much smaller than the males and could fight well.
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So…not sure if Sexual Dimorphism applies to Caribou or how much. If not, then not sure why they only trimmed the does antlers but just completely severed the unicorn horns
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That's because the Warborn does are fighters like their stag counterparts.
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But size/muscle mass, is a key factor in combat
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If we're talking about stags, that make sense because they don't have brains and all brawns.
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Well maybe, but I was trying to figure out the logic. Of how if does had long and elaborate antlers(that presumably could do magic), then why would the Stonehooves only trim them down, instead of severing them? And why they used a different method with unicorns?
On the other hand, I thought that if the species was sexually dimorphic, then the females would’ve never had horns; or at least only short and simple ones. If they lacked horns or magic, and had smaller bodies then that would explain how other FoE universes’ Caribou developed their ideology of male superiority in the first place.
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But since the For Honor does could fight, perhaps they lacked horns but their body size wasn’t sexually dimorphic.
As I said before, we don’t know much if the does did have antlers in the original, or if the species could use magic with antlers. But if the does had long, magic antlers, why would Dainn only trim them but cut off unicorn horns?
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I don't know. Maybe because he doesn't want anybody to rise against him?
Just so I understand it, it says he yanked her panties, but did he rip them off, pulled them down; or only just move the front part covering her genitals to the side?
That’s the spirit