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All the heroic groups are coming together now.
I wonder if Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo might also be attracted to Wiglaf, whenever they’re found.
What about Flash Sentry? Lightning Dust said that she had information on where he's being held. Did you forget all about that?
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one thing at a time
Didn’t they already know and go over this in the previous chapter? They had already heard of the rebel clans from scout and refugee reports
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they would dismiss it as rumors or heresay. Nobody would actually believe it at first.
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But the context here sounds like they’d never even heard of said rumors at all.
In my previous comment, I mentioned the quote where Luna said she'd only so far met traitors, not brainwashed...
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It seems that up until now; Trouble shoes; every stallion that all factions have encountered were traitors, or only considered or depicted as traitors. Trouble shoes is so far the only one who's been identified as brainwashed; every other male was considered a traitor and no one except twilight has recognized any male who was only under mind control?
In the original, any male who wasn't able to resist the mind-control from day one, and who wasn't on their side was automatically considered a traitor. I guess it was easier that way to allow the story to justify killing all of Dainn's followers. The brainwashing detail was left out for the rest of the story after the 1st chapter, but that was ok, we didn't need to see that much explanation regarding why so many were on dainn's side, and why their deaths were alright...
Which also begs the question, if the crystal heart remains uncorrupted, how has dainn managed to brainwash or turn traitor so many stallions? Also, I wonder if any caribou had been brainwashed?
PS: now that brainwashing has been introduced here as a potentially major plot factor, it opens a huge can of worms. Now they must take into consideration that there's no telling how many stallions are actually good, but merely brainwashed, and how many of them they had already killed so far. Not to mention why Twilight was the only one who could tell just by looking into his eyes, and why shoes is the only one she'd noticed and identified so far?
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think of it like a magic sense. As an adept spell caster, she can sense when someone is hexed and will likely have a way to counter it
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well let's chalk it up to people trying to ignore the war. Ignorance is bliss am I right?
Excellent work keep it up
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Well she said she could tell by the look in his eyes, I thought she meant that there was a glow or visible hint of magic in them. Twilight is good with magic of course, but she's not the only good spellcaster there is, if it worked like that then other good unicorns and the other alicorns would've been able to sense the brainwashing as well. When she saw Cherry's memories, she could only see what she saw. Which means that Cherry, and anyone else, could've noticed the look in the brainwasheds' eyes
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and yet, it hasn't been mentioned or noticed at all until now. My point/message here earlier was that the plot of the story supposedly included brainwashing but apart from a little bit of your narrations in the first few chapters, it was never mentioned or noticed ever again until now, and every collaborator was automatically considered to be a traitor with no other mention of otherwise.
I mean don't get me wrong, it wasn't all that bad, the original followed this too; but when Luna mentioned finding nothing but traitors
I thought that stallions who were able to resist the mind control would either join them or at least let them know about it.
Or, like in the original, nearly all the males who were able to resist had already fled with their families, or were secretly aiding the rebellion.
But now, now that this chapter and Trouble shoes has brought it back, the brainwashing issue now opens up a can of worms and a rabbit hole regarding the issue of: who's been brainwashed, who&why some of them could resist, how can they tell, how they havent telled/told, and how many they've all killed so far who weren't actually traitors...
P.S. How have they been brainwashed without the crystal heart?
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Amen to that
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Alright then, so... How did they brainwash without a corrupted Crystal Heart, and did the Warborn and Ghosts' message come before or after Celestia and Luna met Throft?
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Yeah, all that's left is for Chrysalis to meet with Luna, and Cadance/Twilight/Shining armor's faction
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it seems that Shining armour and the knights don't use the Secret entrance to leave and return to the Crystal empire; It says that the Crystal heart maintains a barrier to keep Dainn and his forces out of the empire, so that means the Heart only keeps those who follow dainn out while Shining and his forces, and Bulwark, are free to pass through whenever they want? Wonder if the Crystal couple and Twilight know of the secret entrance or if they'd secured it or also been using it? So far, only Chrysalis has mentioned of the entrance, what does she want with that?
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Question, what’s Dodher mean in the Gods of War?
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patience. all in good time.
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Ok, I was just trying to clarify when exactly did the Warborn's message arrive.
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sometime between when they were trapped in the blizzard while Dainn and his cronies overtook canterlot
Another chapter well done and got to see more of Twilight in this chapter and Double Edge is a pretty good character and good to see him develop here. Songs/music you used here are excellent choices and hope we get to listen to more in future chapters. Hope when the alliance is made with the Crystal Empire Shining wont do anything to stupid do to his hatred for what the Stonehoves have done and see the Warborn and Ghost clan are the better examples of the Caribou race
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Same could be said for their relationship with the changelings
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Indeed
So now there’s also a new religion entering the story here, I wonder what prompted the revival of the faith; did Luna inspire or help revive it? How would modern followers know the details of the religion if ponies stopped following it since over 1000 years ago
I know that the caribou have their own faith as well; wonder how those’ll interact
This was a fairly enjoyabel chapter